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Jul 30 2005, 02:29 AM
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Before she went to bed, she'd brush her teeth and hair,
she'd scrub her face clean, using all her utmost care . Then she'd look into the mirror, to examine her reflection, and there her face was bare, wiped clean of all deception . There drawn upon her face was hurt, all her troubles of the day, the water had washed the glue of her paste-on smile away . And her two tired tear-brimmed eyes were looking back at her, with a voice full of defeat, she whispered to the mirror, " Dear Mirror, i look at you, and i cant recognize who i see, with her lifeless expression and dead eyes, could this girl truly be me ? " And as night went on, she cried herself to sleep, for throughout her day, she had gone through much grief . And in the morning, she'd wake up, brush her teeth and hair, she'd scrub her face clean, using all her utmost care . She'd take the time to apply make-up, to hide the pain etched on her face, and as she walked outdoors, she'd make sure her paste-on smile was in place . |
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lidoxangie paste-on smile Jul 30 2005, 02:29 AM
`SWTWiNKLE3YES thats nicely-written. i can kinda relate =T Jul 30 2005, 01:55 PM
yukichan I like it..
I can really relate to it..
Good job... Jul 30 2005, 02:11 PM
helllla jankyyyy I really really liked this, It was well done. Yeah... Jul 30 2005, 02:18 PM
serendipity x3 I really liked it. I can kind of relate too. Jul 30 2005, 03:00 PM
..:loveee.NuTTii I like it. Appearantly a lot of people can relate... Jul 30 2005, 03:39 PM
DaToNeViEtBoI916 i think you'd make a fine rapper. =] Jul 30 2005, 10:49 PM
iTS PATiLLA xP Thats reallly really nice. I love how everything j... Jul 31 2005, 05:19 AM
Heathasm woww, thats so awesome. just when i thought all th... Jul 31 2005, 06:29 AM
xchrystizzle wow. that's one awesome poem! Jul 31 2005, 10:28 AM
stephinika very nicely written. it flows well and the concept... Jul 31 2005, 04:06 PM
Paradox of Life Beautiful. It was very nicely written. One of my p... Aug 1 2005, 02:53 AM![]() ![]() |