my 14th track, "good night", good night |
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 Jul 26 2005, 01:25 PM
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edited.
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Jul 26 2005, 07:15 PM
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haha this song is really weird...
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Jul 27 2005, 04:10 AM
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wow pure crack
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Jul 27 2005, 11:01 AM
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Wow.. that chorus is really starting to annoying me.
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Jul 27 2005, 11:07 AM
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 oink Group: Member Posts: 1,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,836 |
stick to ur age. i just saw u on ur vacation pic thingy.. u look teeny
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Jul 27 2005, 11:55 AM
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good night everybody, that song made me fall asleep.
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Jul 27 2005, 04:15 PM
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QUOTE(beautifuls0ul_x3 @ Jul 27 2005, 12:55 PM) good night everybody, that song made me fall asleep.  word. Thats a long song. Some of the lyrics are whack and some are pretty good. Try finding a beat and matching the lyrics with it. I reccomend shortening the song because the song would be quite lengthy. If you get a nice flow, emphasis and beat the song might be one of the betters on your album. |
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Jul 27 2005, 05:34 PM
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 yes. Group: Member Posts: 711 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,487 |
don't confuse my opinion w/hate
u need some space between them lines so they won't sound and look like sh*t. its all bunched together like a rhyming dictionary, e.g. play-ray, fade-aid, terrific-scientific, circumstance-romance-trance-bboystance i guess it's safe to say, it sucks |
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