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 Jul 24 2005, 01:33 AM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you!  Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674  |
A Blizzard Of Queries
How mediocre, How monotonous would it be, To live life just like everyone else? What is the point of life, If you have no significance to others? What is the point of life, If you can’t prove yourself to the world? What is the point of life, If you bottle up your potential? It seems opportunities keep passing me by, And yet I brush them off, And think I’m alright where I am, But I’m not, And I think I can’t get any better, Why? I ask, Why am I still waiting? Why does life seem to keep moving on, When I’m being left behind? Why am I so slow? Why am I still sulking over my misfortunes? Why can’t ANYONE HELP ME? It seems I’m beyond repair, But I won’t take the easy road out, With a makeshift noose around my neck, Or my head shoved underwater, I’ll work harder, Past these obstacles, I’m not weak. |
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Jul 24 2005, 01:43 AM
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 Ehh... Group: Member Posts: 36 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 175,878 |
WOO! I'm the first!
 YAY! I think your poem is awsome.
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Jul 24 2005, 03:42 AM
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 Tight Pants | Romance | Let's Dance Group: Member Posts: 73 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 137,066 |
It was a very lovely poem. It entales of self doubt and then I see that you find your strength toward the end of it.
It was nice. |
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Jul 24 2005, 11:08 AM
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 cellophane chests? Group: Member Posts: 488 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,816 |
Your poem reminds me of something that my boyfriend wrote not too long ago. I like your poem. It's very real, no sugarcoating or trying to cover things up. Honest. Good job.
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Jul 25 2005, 08:50 PM
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 Beautifully Broken Group: Member Posts: 45 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 64,542 |
That was awesome. Good job. I relate to that.
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Jul 25 2005, 09:59 PM
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Katt, that was lovely
 Great job. I love this part QUOTE How monotonous would it be,
To live life just like everyone else? What is the point of life, If you have no significance to others? What is the point of life, If you can’t prove yourself to the world? What is the point of life, If you bottle up your potential? |
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Jul 25 2005, 09:59 PM
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 Day's Nearly Over Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,553 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 45,183 |
"It seems I’m beyond repair,
But I won’t take the easy road out, With a makeshift noose around my neck, Or my head shoved underwater, I’ll work harder, Past these obstacles, I’m not weak." I love this part.
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Jul 25 2005, 10:01 PM
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thats a really nice poem, katt. i can totally relate
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