A Story, An odd sort of love story Options

[Sa-Chan]

This'll be slow to begin with and I'll need help in finding a title but I hope you enjoy...




Vague Emotion




Prologue:



She hunched her shoulder and let out a small sigh. Her feelings had been hurt time and time again this week and she was losing it for her sure. She had failed her latest science test, been sent to the office for chewing gum, and now she had found out her boyfriend had taken another girl to prom. How could anything get worse?

She reclined slightly on the couch; punk rock was playing from two different stereos, both turned up as loud as they could be. For some reason noise had always soothed her. She could hear the faint ringing of the phone; it had been going on and on with it's annoying little tone for the last two hours...signaling to her that he was trying to call her again.

She didn't even bother to pick the phone up. What would be the point? He would only grovel, and whine; tell her how much he loved her, missed her...wished she had been there. He would deny that he had fooled around with the girl, he would call the three witnesses, that had seen him and his prom date kiss, liars. The conversation would end in an argument and one of them would hang up on the other...then the tears would start again.

She knew this was how it would end up. They argued so much. She wished they didn't, because deep down she really did love him, but lately she saw no real reason to be with him. He had once made her so happy. She thought back to their first real date. It had been after hours on the beach. She had just laid peacefully in his arms, staring up at the night sky and all her troubles had melted away.

How she longed with all her heart that those times would come back. She wanted so badly to pick up the phone and be comforted by those three words he would utter, 'I love you...'. Even if it was a lie, even if he was only saying that because he needed to be in a relationship and in some sick way he needed her...she wanted to hear him say those words more than anything...

The last song on the track ended leaving her all alone with the loud ringing of the telephone. She tried to block it out. Another memory came back to her. Valentine's day, it had been four days before they had begun going out...four days... She had been his Valentine, they had stayed up all night on the phone together, laughing and talking about nothing and yet everything all at once.

Over those next few days he had hinted heavily at how much he liked her; she had hinted back. Suddenly she let out a soft giggle, it had been the first laugh she had given in a long time. Another memory, the day he asked her out, February 18, she remembered his telling her that he had asked her two bestfriend's permission first. It had been so cute...so kind...

He had by far been her best boyfriend, and she loved him...she truly loved him. Her bestfriend had told her to give her boyfriend a break to talk to him and see what he had to say... Maybe he was right.

She grabbed the phone from the hook quickly.

"H-Hello?" Her voice was a soft quiver, she could hear the tears in her voice, but she tried to remain composed.

"I...didn't think you would pick up," His very voice made her heart leap slightly, and then drop to her stomach.

"I don't know why I did," she replied softly, yet dangerously.

"Don't listen to them...you have to understand...I would never hurt you..." His voice rang loud and clear, and for some reason the very words that were meant to help her...hurt her worse...




Author's Note: Okay, that was the prologue, if you guys like this I'll write Chapter One. It will take place in the future (about two months later). We will find out what happen to the two and how they are doing (as well as find out their names). Also, this is not all a sappy love story it's an adventure that will take place and challenge the heroine's psyche as well as her body..

[*CJ1*]

Wow. I wish I could write. Keep it up! As for the title, give it a unique name. I was thinking Those Memories but it sounds too familiar. Give it a unique name - you're the writer!

[01-supergirl]

Wow that story is greatt. awsome writting. =)

[hair products]

i wanna know what happens now. write!

[conster]

omg hurry up wit the writing would u!?!?!? its sooo good.. omg i wanna read come on!! its rare that i actualy wanna read! lol

[Sa-Chan]

Oh my god o_O Here I was thinking my writing sucks ^^() Anyways, I think I've decided on a name to the story...
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"Vague Emotions" (It probably sucks, I could never do titles heh).

Anyways, onto the Chapter. Which is from the guy's point of view.





Chapter One:




He woke up, his forehead trickling with sweat. He gasped for breath. He was terrified and shaking. Soon his tears were mixed with his sweat. Tears...sweat that taste of salt. He was never going to recover was he?

It had been the nightmare before. She had come back for her revenge in his dreams. She haunted him...day and night. Why couldn't she just forgive him? He hadn't done anything wrong. He had not wronged her, and yet she would put it on her grave that he had... She hated him, but he had never stopped loving her.

He thought back to two months ago.

He had waited for her to pick up. He dialed her number over and over again. He had been crying out to the lord, he had abandoned so long ago, for his help. He wanted, no needed, to hear her voice. Hours went by, but he hadn't given up. Then the phone was finally lifted from the receiver.

"H-Hello?" her voice had been so weak, he almost fell into hysterical sobs when he heard what he had done to the only person he had ever loved.

"I...didn't think you were going to pick up." he had replied, trying to stay strong, he had to get it together.

"I don't know why I did.." her voice remained as soft as an angels, but he could hear the seething hatred...the anger...the danger in it. It scared him...

"Don't listen to them...you have to understand...I would never hurt you..." he spoke louder, trying to get her to believe him by his voice if not by his previous actions.

Silence ensued afterwards...it had only been a couple of minutes of silence, but to him...it felt like hours.

"My friends...over you..." her voice was meek, and it was hard to understand what she said, but...he did.

He opened his mouth to reply, but then he heard the click of the phone. She had hung up on him... He spent the next two days calling over and over again, but her parents said the same thing.

"She left...we don't know where she is; stop calling..."

He sighed yet again, and sat up from his sweat covered bed. He need coffee. He threw on clothes in the dark, and snuck through the window of his room. There was a time when his parents wouldn't have minded his leaving early in the morning, but now was not the time. Ever since her disappearance...he had been different, he had hated himself...and the world...he had been so alone. That must be why they had sent him to psychiatrist after psychiatrist, but he knew...it would never help...He had lost the love his life.

Walking, he brooded silently until he came to the door of a local coffee shop, he swung it open, and walked in. A scowl was all that showed on his face, he was so weak on the inside, but on the outside he could put on a show at least. He went to the counter, and ordered three shots of espresso; after paying, he walked back to a table, and flopped down.

"Nothing like espresso in the morning..." he said with a sigh, and then a girl caught his eyes. Her hair was longer, and she had dyed it with streaks of red, but he could still see her beautiful blonde hair, and when she turned around he saw those beautiful blue eyes of hers...bluer than the ocean itself...

It was her. They stared at eachother. Both as if seeing a ghost, and then the girl walked away without a word.

[ThePrincessofTKD]

wooh!!!

revenge??

is this like...KILL BILL??

haha..adventure??CLIMAXING??

keep on writing girl!!!YOU GOT SKILLZ!!!

lol

[Sa-Chan]

lol, no no no, it's not like Kill Bill ^^() Sorry, but there is gonna be some yeah...anger...*cough*

[ThePrincessofTKD]

lol, no no no, it's not like Kill Bill ^^() Sorry, but there is gonna be some yeah...anger...*cough*

awww...haha..hmmm...anger WITH violence..?or just ANGER..?

*looks forward for next chapter*

i`m on my toes!!!

[casssy]

wow nice! I enjoyed it

[Sa-Chan]

I'll do Chapter Two later today or early tomorrow ^_^. I already know all about it, I just feel like leaving ya'll in anxiety. Also, there might be some violence, hehehe

[dani41790]

woah ur a gud writer.

[Just_Dream]

very nice =D maybe we can share stories sometime ^_^ I'm writing a fanfic.. but I'm too lazy to finish it lol =P very nice though ^_^ so detailed =D

[DesperateXMeasur...]

Well hurry up man! xD
I'll be waiting....

[Stephy110390]

WOW!......

dat was good!...

i want more!!!

[b3atr3d]

Whoaa, dude.. awesome writing. keep it up. :)

[conster]

publish it loll its really good

[Sa-Chan]

Alright, here's the next chapter guys! ^_^!






Chapter Two:


She hadn't believed it when she saw him. She didn't want to believe it. Why had she come back... No, she knew why. She had to come back. She had to see her friend, her poor dying friend, but why...why did she have to run into him?

She tried to make herself believe he hadn't recognized her. That he didn't care. But she knew, deep down, that he had figured out it was her. Why hadn't she left sooner when she saw him. Why had she just stopped, and stared. Why of all times when she went to get coffee did he have to be there?

She was furious, she was hysterical, she was near tears, and she was scared. What if he told her parents she was back in town? What if...what if...what if... So many things ran through her head. She didn't know if she could take this stress. Maybe she should just leave. Mail her friend some flowers. No..she had to see her friend...

"Elise!" She heard her name, it was his voice.

She wanted to stop, to talk, to be held by him. The last two months had been so hard on her spirit. She wanted him to tell her everything was okay, that he loved her. But she knew she couldn't, because she still wanted to hate him. Just because she wanted to hate him...didn't mean she didn't still love him though.

She wouldn't turn around, she wouldn't stop walking, in fact she picked up the pace. She had to get out. She had to move. She could feel the tears that had been threatening to spill for the last two months while she had been on her own. She wouldn't let them though.

"Elise...please...please stop..." Again, he was calling to her, begging for her, but she couldn't listen...she wouldn't listen...

Suddenly she felt a hand grip on her shoulder. She tried to keep moving, but the person's grip was to strong. She stood their, refusing to turn around, refusing to show the person who she wanted to hate most in the world her tears.

"Lucien...let go of me..." was her soft reply.

"No..I already had to let go of you once...never again..." As he spoke he loosened his grip, and she was able to push away from him.

By now it had started to rain, and she ran...and she ran...as the cold rain mixed with her long over-due tears. She didn't stop until she was shaking, and sobbing hysterically, and utterly lost...literally and mentally...

She slumped down in an abandoned alleyway and let the rain and the tears surround her. Let them smother her, as she fell away into her subconcious...into her bottled up thoughts....Tears consumed her being...

[ThePrincessofTKD]

ooh!!!

i felt like crying myself!!!

`cause i was listenin` to some sad music while reading this..

you promised some violence in the second chapter!!

but it was good!

keep on writing!!!

is there a certain number of chapters?

[Sa-Chan]

As of now there is no certain number of chapters, and their will be violence between Chapter Three and Chapter Four, that I will promise you! But I really wanted this Chapter to be sad, and show the depth of the girl.

[silver-rain]

Aw, that was so sad. You're a good writer. Ooh, violence, I wonder what'll happen to Elise and Lucien. Btw- nice names.

[perdyperdybirdy]

AH your a good writer! write more! lol

[ThePrincessofTKD]

As of now there is no certain number of chapters, and their will be violence between Chapter Three and Chapter Four, that I will promise you! But I really wanted this Chapter to be sad, and show the depth of the girl.

YAY!VIOLENCE!...good idea!

i always like people with writing skillz!

i envy them..

and i do miss my writing skillz..

[orlando_bloom_lu...]

ohhh this is a nice story=] cant wait til the next chapter! keep up the great work!

[NiteSerpent]

awww, I wish you already put up chapter 3 and 4 and 5 and so on!!! I wanna knoow what happens!!!