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my rap, awesome-n-hot [possible dejayyy diss]
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post Jul 13 2005, 03:34 AM
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^cos hes an inserure 12 year old korean with no real life except to diss on people
 
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post Jul 13 2005, 01:22 PM
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guys, stop with the member bashing. i'm closing this because that's what all the replies consist of. ;\

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post Jul 13 2005, 02:46 PM
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http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php...1&#entry1454861

reopened and merging.
 
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post Jul 13 2005, 02:47 PM
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dejay that was pretty dope
 
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post Jul 13 2005, 04:56 PM
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so...what...it's...opened...again? so can i continue to finish my diss since jason dissed me back. or should i take in mind that anna said it's trash... _unsure.gif
 
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post Jul 13 2005, 06:34 PM
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QUOTE(stephinika @ Jul 12 2005, 7:17 PM)
please stop with the raps with only the point to diss one another. thanks.
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why?
 
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post Jul 13 2005, 07:00 PM
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QUOTE(basick @ Jul 13 2005, 5:34 PM)
why?
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1. It's annoying
2. It's not good
3. DJ and Jason should keep it amongst themselves
4. It's trash
5. They're stupid publicity stunts that usually draw negative feedback
6. THEY'RE CRUSHING PEOPLES' SELF-ESTEEM JOKE OR NOT.

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post Jul 13 2005, 07:06 PM
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QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 8:00 PM)
1. It's annoying
2. It's not good
3. DJ and Jason should keep it amongst themselves
4. It's trash
5. They're stupid publicity stunts that usually draw negative feedback
6. THEY'RE CRUSHING PEOPLES' SELF-ESTEEM JOKE OR NOT.

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Katherine, I think you're very nice and sweet, but I have to disagree with this, dear.
These are all your opinions..the topic shouldn't be closed just because a couple people think it's bashing, or crushing people's self esteems.

DJ, Jason...are your feelings hurt? Do you feel bad after you read a diss? Or do you laugh, and think of another creative and entertaining one? Creative and Entertaining. This is my opinion on the Diss Wars.

One person thinks it's stupid and annoying..another thinks it's entertaining.

Honestly..you posting here every time about how it's not good, isn't helping anything.
If you really think it sucks, then don't open the topic, read, press add reply, type your comment, and submit. It's as simple as that. wink.gif












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post Jul 13 2005, 08:35 PM
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QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 13 2005, 6:06 PM)
Katherine, I think you're very nice and sweet, but I have to disagree with this, dear.
These are all your opinions..the topic shouldn't be closed just because a couple people think it's bashing, or crushing people's self esteems.

DJ, Jason...are your feelings hurt? Do you feel bad after you read a diss? Or do you laugh, and think of another creative and entertaining one? Creative and Entertaining. This is my opinion on the Diss Wars.

One person thinks it's stupid and annoying..another thinks it's entertaining.

Honestly..you posting here every time about how it's not good, isn't helping anything.
If you really think it sucks, then don't open the topic, read, press add reply, type your comment, and submit. It's as simple as that. wink.gif
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no, my feelings and esteem haven't been crushed. me and jason and mostly everyone else are laughing. i AGREE WITH U OH SO MUCH. =] if they don't like the rap, don't even click the topic!

you said everything that i was thinking! worthy.gifthrob.gifworthy.gifthrob.gifworthy.gifthrob.gifworthy.gifthrob.gifworthy.gif
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post Jul 13 2005, 08:38 PM
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QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 10:16 PM)
Child, this subforum and debate are the only two decent forums on cB. I have every reason to defend it.

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proof that u take it too seriously rolleyes.gif

just dont read the topic if u dont like it, its that simple.
 
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post Jul 13 2005, 09:29 PM
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I hope I didn't start a bunch of like...hatred amongst all you guys...me being a noobie on the forum and all
 
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post Jul 13 2005, 11:38 PM
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QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 13 2005, 6:06 PM)
Katherine, I think you're very nice and sweet, but I have to disagree with this, dear.
These are all your opinions..the topic shouldn't be closed just because a couple people think it's bashing, or crushing people's self esteems.

DJ, Jason...are your feelings hurt? Do you feel bad after you read a diss? Or do you laugh, and think of another creative and entertaining one? Creative and Entertaining. This is my opinion on the Diss Wars.

One person thinks it's stupid and annoying..another thinks it's entertaining.

Honestly..you posting here every time about how it's not good, isn't helping anything.
If you really think it sucks, then don't open the topic, read, press add reply, type your comment, and submit. It's as simple as that. wink.gif
..flowers.gif
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I could choose not to read it, but I posted because I feel like posting my opinion about this crap. Okay, so you guys don't get "offended", but what if someone just didn't like someone else and decided to make a dissing rap about them? And then they could say "No! It's just for fun!" I wouldnt' want someone doing that to me. If you guys want to do it so bad, keep it to yourselves because Stephanie, Anna, Justin and I think it's stupid. Share it with the people that want to hear, but you don't have to go blabbing all this shit on the WRITING forum. Sure, the lyrical forum's a good idea. When I'm looking for good, inspirational writing, I shouldn't have to stumble across litter like this.



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post Jul 13 2005, 11:44 PM
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QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 9:38 PM)
I could choose not to read it, but I posted because I feel like posting my opinion about this crap.
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well then, if it bugs you so much, all you have to do is NOT read it and you won't have any opinion to really state because you never really read what was in the thread. I don't see how this really effects you negatively in any way.


QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 9:38 PM)
Okay, so you guys don't get "offended", but what if someone just didn't like someone else and decided to make a dissing rap about them? And then they could say "No! It's just for fun!" I wouldnt' want someone doing that to me.
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if that happens you can regulate.


QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 9:38 PM)
keep it to yourselves because Stephanie, Anna, Justin and I think it's stupid. Share it with the people that want to hear
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And atleast four of us on this board enjoy it. what's your point? this forum has 112,000+ people on it, your argument can be totally turned around in saying, "well me and dejay and jason and brownsugar enjoy it, so just dont look in the thread" unless you get a strong majority, that argument in particular really doesnt hold any water. and actually our argument is more logical because it doesnt stifle anyone from doing what they want but rather your way would hurt those who want to do this but now cant because a small few dislike it while you guys could totally avoid it easily. we'll just be sure to label our threads for you.
it may be "litter" to you but to a few of us it sure isn't anywhere near that.
 
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post Jul 14 2005, 08:21 AM
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QUOTE(J-DraGoNz @ Jul 13 2005, 9:44 PM)
well then, if it bugs you so much, all you have to do is NOT read it and you won't have any opinion to really state because you never really read what was in the thread. I don't see how this really effects you negatively in any way.
if that happens you can regulate.
And atleast four of us on this board enjoy it. what's your point? this forum has 112,000+ people on it, your argument can be totally turned around in saying, "well me and dejay and jason and brownsugar enjoy it, so just dont look in the thread" unless you get a strong majority, that argument in particular really doesnt hold any water. and actually our argument is more logical because it doesnt stifle anyone from doing what they want but rather your way would hurt those who want to do this but now cant because a small few dislike it while you guys could totally avoid it easily. we'll just be sure to label our threads for you.
it may be "litter" to you but to a few of us it sure isn't anywhere near that.
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You're bringing invalid, unworthy attention to this forum in a very invalid, unworthy manner.

What you don't seem to understand (Mr. 52 posts) is that some of us have been submitting well thought out prose/poetry in this forum for over a year.

I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily//
You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly//


Are you serious? This kind of nonsense can't be saved for an AIM conversation? It couldn't be done in the Forum Games section (where people couldn't spam "OHHHH DISSED!!11" and have it count for their posts)? This kind of idiocy is what is going to attract attention to this forum now?

Like I said -- if that's what we're reduced to now, I'll just f**king skip it.

And thanks, by the way. Thanks for bringing this shit in here.
 
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post Jul 14 2005, 10:17 AM
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Yeah, so let's make thread, after thread displaying a 'diss'.
 
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post Jul 14 2005, 01:34 PM
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I'll have to agree with Anna, Katt and Justin. This is stupid and uneeded. I've seen it in the chat as well. I like rap, but I have to speak up along with Anna, Katt and Justin.

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well then, if it bugs you so much, all you have to do is NOT read it and you won't have any opinion to really state because you never really read what was in the thread.


We've been doing that all along, and we're sick of it. So please, keep this PRIVATE. kthx.
 
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post Jul 14 2005, 04:01 PM
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QUOTE(CrackedRearView @ Jul 14 2005, 6:21 AM)
You're bringing invalid, unworthy attention to this forum in a very invalid, unworthy manner.

What you don't seem to understand (Mr. 52 posts) is that some of us have been submitting well thought out prose/poetry in this forum for over a year.

I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily//
You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly//


Are you serious?  This kind of nonsense can't be saved for an AIM conversation?  It couldn't be done in the Forum Games section (where people couldn't spam "OHHHH DISSED!!11" and have it count for their posts)?  This kind of idiocy is what is going to attract attention to this forum now?

Like I said -- if that's what we're reduced to now, I'll just f**king skip it.

And thanks, by the way.  Thanks for bringing this shit in here.
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Gee, I didn't know you had to have a lot of posts to be respected around here or have your opinion count.

Thanks for everyone who supports hip hop and/or tried to back me up on this and stand up for something you believe in. Good looks fam.

And wow you people sure do take "post counts" incredibly serious. o.O

Just because it may be "nonsense" to you, not all people are so narrowly-minded and have the same point of view. But apparently, you don't seem to understand that.

and thanks for blaming me for this. I guess I am to blame for all of it huh. Haha. You guys man...I don't even know what to say anymore. hahaha whatever, peace.
 
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post Jul 14 2005, 08:09 PM
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QUOTE(not_your_average @ Jul 14 2005, 11:34 AM)
We've been doing that all along, and we're sick of it. So please, keep this PRIVATE. kthx.
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Sick of what? Is not clicking a topic that hard? If it was up to me then the entertainment section would be only about underground hip hop, but it isn't, so all I can do is not click the topics about 50 cent and I'm good.
 
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post Jul 14 2005, 09:46 PM
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QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 14 2005, 2:04 PM)
you quoted someone telling you to just not open the thread...

and you said you've been doing it all along? if you were doing it all along....then you wouldn't know if it was stupid, or uneeded. you wouldn't be sick of it either. you'd have no knowledge of it.
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WHATEVER -- CHALK IT UP AS A WIN FOR YOU.

It's over.
 
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post Jul 15 2005, 01:45 AM
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Sick of what? Is not clicking a topic that hard? If it was up to me then the entertainment section would be only about underground hip hop, but it isn't, so all I can do is not click the topics about 50 cent and I'm good.
i oh so agree.

just let the boys be. if you dont like the topic, go ahead post your opinion and dont click on it again if you have a distaste for whats going on inside the link.
 
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post Jul 15 2005, 03:01 AM
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hey, I think you guys are being a little harsh.

Granted I don't like rap, and most of your lines didn't make any sense, but still, he's 13...I couldn't write that when I was 13 ermm.gif

the rhymes were O.K. although some of the rythm was a bit off...especially the last three lines, they just didn't flow.

Try to write about things you know more about as they said above, and read it a couple times afterward to make sure you get the flow right. Make alot fo revisions and really think about the most apropriate words to use and such. Usually raps try to get across a certain message (not always) maybe you should choose a basis for your rap before you start writting it. Just sketch out what you want the rap to be about in story form, and then turn it into a rap when you've got the main idea.

Don't get upset because of all the negative comments you got, although this may not be a peice of art, there's plenty of time to improve, and if you really keep at it, by the time you've grown up you'll be awesome. flowers.gif

QUOTE(xquizit @ Jul 12 2005, 10:09 AM)
^ We diss him because he doesn't write his lyrics. He's got a ghostwriter.
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He doesn't have a ghost writter anymore mellow.gif

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I AM NO LONGER JASON'S GHOSTWRITER. I already showed everyone the one I ghostwrote for him in that one thred.


Give it up guys, it's a forum on the internet. This is a free world, he is a free person, he can post what he wants. You don't have to read it, you don't have to click on the link, hell you don't even have to go to CB, you dont' even NEED to go on the internet. This is all by choice. He chose to post his rap in this forum, and he has all rights to do that. It is not your every right to be jerks, I'm sure that's in the rules somehwere that you arn't alowed to diss someone for no aperent reason. So just stop it. You're probably really hurting his feelings and crushing his dreams. He could be really good some day, you never know, there's no reason to bash him to the ground. So stop being self centered, jugde-mentel complainers and give him a break wink.gif
 
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post Jul 18 2005, 01:19 PM
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QUOTE(HoodieObsessed @ Jul 15 2005, 3:01 AM)
He doesn't have a ghost writter anymore  mellow.gif
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It's clear that he does. If you read his regular posts, you'll notice how limited his vocabulary and verbal skills are.


Constructive criticism? How about post your own original material. stubborn.gif
 

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