my rap, awesome-n-hot [possible dejayyy diss] |
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| *nightmare4taki* |
 Jul 12 2005, 03:00 PM
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That wasn't bad Jason. Just have to say this
I AM NO LONGER JASON'S GHOSTWRITER. I already showed everyone the one I ghostwrote for him in that one thred. I haven't written another freestyle for jason since the track "Ghostwriter". If he has a ghostwriter it must be another person. Im not going to front though Jason you have improved but I still dont think youre ready to battle Yula's cousin or DJ. |
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| *nightmare4taki* |
Jul 12 2005, 03:09 PM
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Jason try again man you just got murked in Round one. Dj you dropped some very creative and artistic lines. I would be up for a battle with you DJ but Im not the battling type of writer when it comes to rap.
Round One Winner: DJ I find this keystyle entertaining and amusing to say the least. |
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| *chaneun* |
Jul 12 2005, 03:24 PM
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DJ, guess what?
All you sucker MCs got nothing on me// on my grades on my lines can't touch Kevin G. I'm a mathlete, I'm a nerd, it's absurd, but forget whatcha heard// I'm like James Bond the 3rd. sh-sh-shaken not stirred I'm Kevin Gnapoor// The G's silent when I sneak through your door// and make love to your woman on the bathroom floor// I don't play it like Shaggy, you'll know it was me// Cos the next time you see her she'll go// "Oh, Kevin G" DJ, you got served. |
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Jul 12 2005, 04:35 PM
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 music messiah mastered money makin' mathematically  Group: Member Posts: 602 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,886 |
QUOTE(chaneun @ Jul 12 2005, 2:24 PM) DJ, guess what? All you sucker MCs got nothing on me// on my grades on my lines can't touch Kevin G. I'm a mathlete, I'm a nerd, it's absurd, but forget whatcha heard// I'm like James Bond the 3rd. sh-sh-shaken not stirred I'm Kevin Gnapoor// The G's silent when I sneak through your door// and make love to your woman on the bathroom floor// I don't play it like Shaggy, you'll know it was me// Cos the next time you see her she'll go// "Oh, Kevin G" DJ, you got served.  ahahahhahahahahhaa =] impressed. ahhahaa. |
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Jul 12 2005, 06:52 PM
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mood: content Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
^ Such a good sport. :)
Nice rhymes, I'm sick of: "You ain't got What I got So go, GO Go smoke some ... pot." kind of stuff. |
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Jul 12 2005, 07:02 PM
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 Lil JC Group: Member Posts: 868 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,741 |
ok how bout dj goes to entertainment cuz it is entertaining and jason stays in writing cuz thats all it deserves i haven't seen one entertaining thing in writing besides this right here so...yeah
jason: 0 dj: 1 next round BEGIN! |
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| *wind&fire* |
Jul 12 2005, 07:03 PM
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QUOTE(chaneun @ Jul 13 2005, 6:24 AM) DJ, guess what? All you sucker MCs got nothing on me// on my grades on my lines can't touch Kevin G. I'm a mathlete, I'm a nerd, it's absurd, but forget whatcha heard// I'm like James Bond the 3rd. sh-sh-shaken not stirred I'm Kevin Gnapoor// The G's silent when I sneak through your door// and make love to your woman on the bathroom floor// I don't play it like Shaggy, you'll know it was me// Cos the next time you see her she'll go// "Oh, Kevin G" DJ, you got served. that aint even yours |
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| *chaneun* |
Jul 12 2005, 07:10 PM
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^I know, I just wrote it out as a rap because I can't think of any ghetto-like rhymes.
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Jul 12 2005, 07:12 PM
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 L!ckitySplit Group: Member Posts: 4,325 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 129,329 |
QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 3:37 PM) Stop ruining the writing forum with your childish mindless rhymes, kids. Post this bullshit in entertainment or something. Or even better, don't post it at all. Grow up. u take the internet too seriously 
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Jul 12 2005, 07:30 PM
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QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:51 PM) I really don't care what your motives are, whether it be for laughs or for real. It's immature and stupid, and I'm sick of it spamming up writing. This crap isn't even deserving enough to be called a piece of "writing." You want to keep up your immature rivalry? You want to sink down to the level of a twelve-year-old? Go do it in entertainment; after all, that's what "raps" are. Writing is to be appreciated, to break a threshhold. This is no where near worthy of being called "writing."  Jesus DJ, I thought you got the hint last time. This is immature litter. STOP IT. |
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Jul 12 2005, 07:34 PM
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CHYEAAHHH MAN Group: Member Posts: 1,255 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 168,013 |
dammmnn you busted on himm
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Jul 12 2005, 07:49 PM
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QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 12:51 PM) I really don't care what your motives are, whether it be for laughs or for real. It's immature and stupid, and I'm sick of it spamming up writing. This crap isn't even deserving enough to be called a piece of "writing." You want to keep up your immature rivalry? You want to sink down to the level of a twelve-year-old? Go do it in entertainment; after all, that's what "raps" are. Writing is to be appreciated, to break a threshhold. This is no where near worthy of being called "writing." This is the writing forum... you can't dictate what is "worthy" to be in writing... |
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Jul 12 2005, 08:07 PM
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My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 12 2005, 6:52 PM) ...Oh C'mon guys... These disses are supposed to be humerous..but no, drama has to be brought into EVERYTHING as usual.. You're not gaining anything by saying, "Jason sucks", in every thread..  It's not that he's actually dissing Jason; it's just not necessary to make these stupid "raps". If they wanted to joke with each other, they could just do it in private because people like DJ are just littering the writing forum with this annoying shit. Other people who made Jason dissing raps had their topics closed. I don't see why this hasn't been closed yet. |
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| *Statistik* |
Jul 12 2005, 08:38 PM
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I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily//
You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly// I'm having fun knocking you and killing you// These cB fans are thinking your garbage, booing you// I treat you like a animal, because you can't listen at once// Look, i didnt come here to battle with no cunts// Knowledge is a power// I grow from slow to extreme like a flower// My lyrics are pure, danger explicity// I produce thunder and lightning at the same thing like electricty// My flow goes rapid and the speed of motion like velocity// Yo, dj i dont care if your name is dejayyyy or shit// I'm matrix reloaded, im trying to come back and make a strong hit// My Hits Make Girls Groove And Move Your Songs Make Drool And Snooze// DJ, This Is To Easy Its Like U Choose-To-Lose !! // You gon give me a free notebook? that really helps// You can call me the Mr. Olympic Man, Ha I'm Michael Phelps// The more notebooks and pens i get, the more disses I'll set// After it's all written, i can finally prove to you bitches that it wasnt bitten// So dejayyy why don't you bow down, i have to admit you're worse than bow wow// Give up your career, I really don't know why you belong here// My lyrics is cold, quick to drain ya soul in a round, dog// Slow ya roll or I'll put you in a hole like a ground hog// DJ, my last words are that this game between you and I is ova// I deserve to get retired yet come back to the game like h-ova// hehe..it all ends here dj..all ends.. |
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Jul 12 2005, 08:39 PM
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QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jul 12 2005, 6:38 PM) I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily// You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly// that was so dumb i gotta laugh... pardon me i had to laugh at that  QUOTE Knowledge is a power// I grow from slow to extreme like a flower//
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Jul 12 2005, 08:40 PM
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 t3h koolest guy in cB Group: Member Posts: 2,194 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 513 |
umm.... nice i guess? first line was tight.. but you lost it when you started comparing yourself to a flower..
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Jul 12 2005, 08:41 PM
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music messiah mastered money makin' mathematically Group: Member Posts: 602 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,886 |
ha, u really wanna get pwned eh?
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Jul 12 2005, 08:43 PM
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L!ckitySplit Group: Member Posts: 4,325 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 129,329 |
QUOTE(basick @ Jul 12 2005, 9:39 PM) that was so dumb i gotta laugh... pardon me i had to laugh at that may i laugh with you?
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Jul 12 2005, 08:43 PM
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that was awesome-n-hot.
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Jul 12 2005, 09:10 PM
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this may i say is the worst diss in history.
QUOTE Knowledge is a power// I grow from slow to extreme like a flower// ROFLMFAO DeJayyyyy: ima diss that flower line. DeJayyyyy: big time it isn't the end Jason, not yet... 
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Jul 12 2005, 09:15 PM
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pwn?
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| *Azarel* |
Jul 12 2005, 09:16 PM
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QUOTE(L!ckitySplit @ Jul 12 2005, 5:12 PM) u take the internet too seriously Child, this subforum and debate are the only two decent forums on cB. I have every reason to defend it.QUOTE(basick @ Jul 12 2005, 5:49 PM) This is the writing forum... you can't dictate what is "worthy" to be in writing... Uh huh, but I am allowed to have an opinion. And obviously, that was mine.
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| *stephinika* |
Jul 12 2005, 09:17 PM
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^^x2
because no one who could close it hasn't seen it yet... please stop with the raps with only the point to diss one another. thanks. closed |
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| *stephinika* |
Jul 12 2005, 09:18 PM
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QUOTE please stop with the raps with only the point to diss one another. thanks. like i said earlier...please stop guys. thanks. closed. |
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Jul 13 2005, 01:51 AM
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 The Lyricist Group: Member Posts: 126 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 168,967 |
QUOTE(xquizit @ Jul 12 2005, 11:09 AM) ^ We diss him because he doesn't write his lyrics. He's got a ghostwriter. ah, I see. Well then...that just changes everything. what the heck are you doing posting up lyrics as your own when someone else write them for you? o.O I fail to see any accomplishment in that. I mean, it's one thing to have someone ghost write for you and you lace a track with those lyrics but to just post them...umm...yea. Okay. |
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