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my rap, awesome-n-hot [possible dejayyy diss]
*Statistik*
post Jul 11 2005, 07:45 PM
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LEAVE CONTRUCTIVE CRITICISM OR DON'T POST AT ALL. DO NOT USE OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE IN THESE "BATTLES", WHICH INCLUDES OFFENSIVE RACIAL SLURS.

YOU ALL HAVE BEEN WARNED.

-Fae



Yo I'm just trying to prove my point//
I'm trying to make this a burning hot joint//
Y'all people can't feel my rhymes and lines//
Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines//
My girls got more taste on me than bud light//
All you gotta do is holla and i'll make ya tight//
I'm gonna take this shit to the hardcore extreme//
I'm like The Game because I get nightmares and dreams//
Yeah dejayyyy my name is jason..//
I'm attempting to get a trace-in//
You're freddy kreuger? oh man i'm going to get feared//
Ask all my hip-hop fans, they'll say I always get cheered//
If you wanna be freddy dejayyy, you must be afraid of fire//
Damn, That's pity no wonder you can't get any higher//
When I get retired, The Kangsta will be remembered//
So i'm gonna finish you off, i hope you get dismembered//
Yeah you are the game dejayyyy because i always play you//
First improve your freestyles bytch and I will pay you//
Yeah i'm 50 cent because I get a lot of beef//
Call me the king because I'm always the cheef//
And now one more thing dejayyy don't disrespect me//
I achieved more than you losa, I'm always connected//
Call me the hard mirror, because I'm always reflected//

This post has been edited by uninspiredfae: Jul 15 2005, 12:30 AM
 

Posts in this topic
Statistik   my rap   Jul 11 2005, 07:45 PM
wind&fire   you can drive?   Jul 11 2005, 07:46 PM
DrNick311   This is yet another example of why you need to get...   Jul 11 2005, 08:13 PM
Just Blaze   If you are interested, I am looking for new rapper...   Jul 11 2005, 08:13 PM
Hiphop d[-_-]b   omgoodness. please do NOT give the boy hope. then ...   Jul 11 2005, 10:53 PM
RockizLife   God. Help this young man boy.   Jul 11 2005, 11:09 PM
Paradox of Life   "Yo I'm just trying to prove my point// I...   Jul 11 2005, 11:10 PM
sadolakced acid   GOD. boy, get your syncapation right, your rhymes...   Jul 11 2005, 11:33 PM
lbjshaq2345   QUOTECall me the hard mirror, because I'm alwa...   Jul 11 2005, 11:40 PM
CrackedRearView   Do you have to ruin the writing forum with this dr...   Jul 12 2005, 01:30 AM
J-DraGoNz   Lol everywhere I go this kid gets nothing but hate...   Jul 12 2005, 08:49 AM
xquizit   ^ We diss him because he doesn't write his lyr...   Jul 12 2005, 01:09 PM
J-DraGoNz   QUOTE(xquizit @ Jul 12 2005, 11:09 AM)^ We di...   Jul 13 2005, 01:51 AM
L!ckitySplit   ^ ya she did i thought he said he was gonna write...   Jul 12 2005, 01:13 PM
Hiphop d[-_-]b   QUOTEBut you gotta realize that true hip hop comes...   Jul 12 2005, 01:37 PM
De112   dissing me back, eh jason?! hahaha. don't ...   Jul 12 2005, 01:41 PM
De112   FROM NOW ON, ALL THE DISSES SHALL BE POSTED IN THE...   Jul 12 2005, 01:43 PM
L!ckitySplit   lol yaaaaaay! *claps*   Jul 12 2005, 01:46 PM
beautifuls0ul_x3   DJ, everyday you seem to amaze me. <3 That shit...   Jul 12 2005, 01:47 PM
beautifuls0ul_x3   jason, honestly you went all over the place and it...   Jul 12 2005, 02:12 PM
Funky Buddha   Shit is awesome man! hahahah Jason just gets p...   Jul 12 2005, 02:34 PM
Azarel   Stop ruining the writing forum with your childish ...   Jul 12 2005, 02:37 PM
De112   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:37 PM)Stop ruin...   Jul 12 2005, 02:43 PM
Azarel   QUOTE(De112 @ Jul 12 2005, 12:43 PM)whoa calm...   Jul 12 2005, 02:51 PM
De112   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:51 PM)I really ...   Jul 12 2005, 02:53 PM
Paradox of Life   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:51 PM)I really ...   Jul 12 2005, 07:30 PM
basick   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 12:51 PM)I really...   Jul 12 2005, 07:49 PM
L!ckitySplit   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 3:37 PM)Stop ruin...   Jul 12 2005, 07:12 PM
not_your_average   I'll have to agree with Anna, Katt and Justin....   Jul 14 2005, 01:34 PM
basick   QUOTE(not_your_average @ Jul 14 2005, 11:34 A...   Jul 14 2005, 08:09 PM
jooleeah   That was amusing. Wow...   Jul 12 2005, 02:48 PM
nightmare4taki   That wasn't bad Jason. Just have to say this ...   Jul 12 2005, 03:00 PM
nightmare4taki   Jason try again man you just got murked in Round o...   Jul 12 2005, 03:09 PM
chaneun   DJ, guess what? All you sucker MCs got nothing on...   Jul 12 2005, 03:24 PM
De112   QUOTE(chaneun @ Jul 12 2005, 2:24 PM)DJ, gues...   Jul 12 2005, 04:35 PM
wind&fire   QUOTE(chaneun @ Jul 13 2005, 6:24 AM)DJ, gues...   Jul 12 2005, 07:03 PM
mocassinsx29   ^ Such a good sport. :) Nice rhymes, I'm sick...   Jul 12 2005, 06:52 PM
lbjshaq2345   ok how bout dj goes to entertainment cuz it is ent...   Jul 12 2005, 07:02 PM
chaneun   ^I know, I just wrote it out as a rap because I ca...   Jul 12 2005, 07:10 PM
Lo Mein   dammmnn you busted on himm   Jul 12 2005, 07:34 PM
Statistik   I really don't know what your doin in your hip...   Jul 12 2005, 08:38 PM
basick   QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jul 12 2005, 6:38 PM)I rea...   Jul 12 2005, 08:39 PM
L!ckitySplit   QUOTE(basick @ Jul 12 2005, 9:39 PM)that was ...   Jul 12 2005, 08:43 PM
wayne   umm.... nice i guess? first line was tight.. but y...   Jul 12 2005, 08:40 PM
De112   ha, u really wanna get pwned eh?   Jul 12 2005, 08:41 PM
basick   that was awesome-n-hot.   Jul 12 2005, 08:43 PM
beautifuls0ul_x3   this may i say is the worst diss in history. QUOT...   Jul 12 2005, 09:10 PM
Fallen Fairy   pwn? fallen fairy   Jul 12 2005, 09:15 PM
Azarel   QUOTE(L!ckitySplit @ Jul 12 2005, 5:12 PM...   Jul 12 2005, 09:16 PM
L!ckitySplit   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 10:16 PM)Child, t...   Jul 13 2005, 08:38 PM
stephinika   ^^x2 because no one who could close it hasn...   Jul 12 2005, 09:17 PM
basick   QUOTE(stephinika @ Jul 12 2005, 7:17 PM)pleas...   Jul 13 2005, 06:34 PM
Paradox of Life   QUOTE(basick @ Jul 13 2005, 5:34 PM)why? 1....   Jul 13 2005, 07:00 PM
brownsugar08   QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 8:00 PM)1. It...   Jul 13 2005, 07:06 PM
De112   QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 13 2005, 6:06 PM)Kat...   Jul 13 2005, 08:35 PM
Paradox of Life   QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 13 2005, 6:06 PM)Kat...   Jul 13 2005, 11:38 PM
J-DraGoNz   QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 9:38 PM)I could ...   Jul 13 2005, 11:44 PM
CrackedRearView   QUOTE(J-DraGoNz @ Jul 13 2005, 9:44 PM)w...   Jul 14 2005, 08:21 AM
J-DraGoNz   QUOTE(CrackedRearView @ Jul 14 2005, 6:21 AM)...   Jul 14 2005, 04:01 PM
stephinika   QUOTEplease stop with the raps with only the point...   Jul 12 2005, 09:18 PM
wind&fire   ^cos hes an inserure 12 year old korean with no re...   Jul 13 2005, 03:34 AM
Frankie   guys, stop with the member bashing. i'm closin...   Jul 13 2005, 01:22 PM
kryogenix   http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php...1...   Jul 13 2005, 02:46 PM
J-DraGoNz   dejay that was pretty dope   Jul 13 2005, 02:47 PM
De112   so...what...it's...opened...again? so can i co...   Jul 13 2005, 04:56 PM
J-DraGoNz   I hope I didn't start a bunch of like...hatred...   Jul 13 2005, 09:29 PM
Hiphop d[-_-]b   QUOTESick of what? Is not clicking a topic that ha...   Jul 15 2005, 01:45 AM
HoodieObsessed   hey, I think you guys are being a little harsh. G...   Jul 15 2005, 03:01 AM
xquizit   QUOTE(HoodieObsessed @ Jul 15 2005, 3:01 AM)H...   Jul 18 2005, 01:19 PM


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