The Blood of Roses |
The Blood of Roses |
Jul 11 2005, 09:13 AM
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![]() caZILika ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 10 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 105,652 |
The blood of roses
crimson red. A fire chosen to fill with dread. The child's darkness, monsters weep. Step onto the threshold. The poison runs deep. Of flowered vineyards growing dust. Of pipes long frozen collecting rust. The gift of roses' hard, cold brass. A fire chosen to reduce to ash. A child's innocense, monsters weep. And break the threshold. Poisoned sleep. |
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cazilika The Blood of Roses Jul 11 2005, 09:13 AM
stephinika very nicely written. it flows very nicely and the ... Jul 11 2005, 03:34 PM
xblueradiance Awesome job! I love the very last line... you ... Jul 11 2005, 08:54 PM
SillyCourtney I really liked that. It's like somehow.. I cou... Jul 12 2005, 04:25 PM
Midnight Faerie I loved that. ^_^ It's alot like the poems I u... Jul 12 2005, 04:52 PM![]() ![]() |