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Basick and Wayne Present - All Eyes on Kangsta, World Premiere of Kangsta Lovin Inside !
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post Jul 5 2005, 01:58 PM
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what, like one of those disney actir-gone-singer ppl. Well, they are way worse than him, i'll give him that. And its not even like the whole track his bad. THe music is nice, the lyrics are interestingly good, but the delivery is meh. I mean, I'm no rapper, but I know a thing or two about putting passion into what you do. THis guy sounds like he has no passion. He's like a drone just rappin' and just let the words flood out of him with no soul behind them. I mean, if he's talking about other rappers being shit and stuff, he has to expect that kinda criticism, especially if he's putting stuff out like that.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:02 PM
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QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 5 2005, 2:54 PM)
please only post constructive critiscism
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So I'm not allowed to give my opinion anymore? huh.gif

And Jason is 13, not 12.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:05 PM
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^ But saying he's good isn't helping either.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:06 PM
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Was it me or did teh rap just sound like a computer generated voice program? I think less nights alone are required to 'hone' your rapping skills
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:06 PM
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the kind of response needed is constructive critisism. Telling him he sucks doesnt do much. telling him he sucks because his lyrics are unbeliveable and you cant understand him, helps him make improvements.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:07 PM
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^ EXACTLY MY POINT!...gosh people stubborn.gif
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:09 PM
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QUOTE(funbobby @ Jul 5 2005, 11:06 AM)
Was it me or did teh rap just sound like a computer generated voice program? I think less nights alone are required to 'hone' your rapping skills
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you make a good point. PUT MORE EXPRESSION in ur lyrics!
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:16 PM
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its not like he's all bad. I was just telling it how I heard it. But lemme get the facts that have been said by different members:

1. Step away from the mic at times so you're more audible. Other times step to the mic because you're too quiet.
2. More expression
3. Outrageous lyrics - need some improvement: "try talking about things that normal 13 year olds go through"[karamelle]
[karamelle] 4. Needs to target audience within his age range
[basick] 5. Human crack in flesh?
[natE.A]6. Get more experience and get some years under your belt before recording again (diluted version)

Did I miss anything? Basically, he's on his way, he's just not there yet.

New comments on how Jason can improve.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:18 PM
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jason is human crack in the flesh.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:19 PM
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try talking about things that normal 13 year olds go through. I mean, the entire idea of making money off of music is appealing to the right audience. Right now, any target audience that you COULD sell to, you won't sell to because your lyrics don't target them. The main people who buy music are 13 to 21. That is your audience. You are talking about things that only older people know about, but since you are son young, they won't take you seriously. so tone your message down a notch, and try to appeal to your age group. They are the ones who are gonna buy.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 02:38 PM
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too quiet, off beat, personally kid, hit puberty before u record again

(*my brother is a rapper, my dad owns a talent agency, i go through this shit every day)
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 03:55 PM
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oh, and another suggestion? Try not using a computer mic? I mean, a karaoke mic has better quality. it might help.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 04:09 PM
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QUOTE(blkpride @ Jul 5 2005, 1:38 PM)
STFU he was terrible
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Never once did you see me tell the people who said he sucked to STFU because they are entitled to their opinion as I am entitled to my opinion. That was not even a jab at anyone just a word of encouragement to Jason to keep pursuing what inspires him. I actually commend Jason for having the courage to try when so many others would not be willing to do the same. Once Again Good Job Kangsta.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 06:08 PM
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when I rap, I sound more gangsterish.

Oh, and good job Jason. flowers.gif
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 06:56 PM
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The best way to get the best sound off your mic is to take your bottom lip off of it and back up and speak up a little. You seriously remind me of fabolous and he's a shitty rapper to begin with. I bet you spent a lot of f**king time on your lyrics... but, they really could've been better. Do you know what I should do? I should record your song over for you and you'll see how you're supposed to be doing it. Damn, someone... hand over the instrumental. I don't even listen to rap... and I know that the song you're putting out is weak. You really need to rethink your profession... I'm being serious here, as well. You're what? 12? 13?... talking about f**king girls... and some shit about a club. You're not even old enough to go to a teen nightclub. How about we be a little realistic, people? I can rip it better and it's not even my style. Hah. Pitiful.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:07 PM
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bump...so this can be closed too.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:07 PM
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Hah Mel, I was the one who gave you the link to the song. XD
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:08 PM
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QUOTE(kryoogenix @ Posted: Jul 5 2005, 5:06 PM)
i haven no problem doing that. just bump up the kangsta thread and i'll close it.
topic closed.
Bumped.
Thank god.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:08 PM
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the controversy thread got closed so i have to close this one. ;\

TOPIC CLOSED
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:13 PM
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QUOTE(Frankie @ Jul 5 2005, 7:08 PM)
the controversy thread got closed so i have to close this one. ;\

TOPIC CLOSED
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unfortunately, this thread is part of cbnews, so it is an internal thing. controversy links to an external website, which is advertising.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:13 PM
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thanks kyro.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:15 PM
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QUOTE(basick @ Jul 5 2005, 7:13 PM)
thanks kyro.
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no prob. just follow the rules, don't do drugs, stay in school and drink milk, ok?

and it's kryo, not kyro.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:20 PM
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QUOTE(kryogenix @ Jul 5 2005, 5:13 PM)
unfortunately, this thread is part of cbnews, so it is an internal thing. controversy links to an external website, which is advertising.
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Um, then wouldn't band threads and other threads of the sort also be considered advertising? Or Controversy could've been moved to Entertainment. *Shrug* I don't know. mellow.gif
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:21 PM
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QUOTE(sharerol @ Jul 5 2005, 7:20 PM)
Um, then wouldn't band threads and other threads of the sort also be considered advertising?  Or Controversy could've been moved to Entertainment.  *Shrug*  I don't know.  mellow.gif
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yes, but this is part of cbnews, which is an internal function of these forums.

i'm moving this to writing.
 
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post Jul 5 2005, 07:22 PM
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QUOTE(kryogenix @ Jul 5 2005, 7:13 PM)
unfortunately, this thread is part of cbnews, so it is an internal thing. controversy links to an external website, which is advertising.
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oh great. now i look like the mean moderator! ph34r.gif dun dun duh
 
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