the edge, shorter than normal |
  |
 Jun 25 2005, 10:39 AM
Post
#1
|
|
 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
The Edge
trip. stumble. fall. tumble without knowing down the stairs along the hall a descent to the cellar while i sit at the kitchen table insufficient foresight to see the edge of the cliff screaming, spiralling down i still havent seen the edge if being yourself hurts someone else can i be another me? inividuality the key to misery? hypocrisy and falacies? the bottom getting close crack of a broken neck and i still havent seen the edge |
|
|
|
| *stephinika* |
Jun 25 2005, 02:13 PM
Post
#2
|
|
Guest |
very nicely written. your vocabulary is great, always gets the message of your writings across nicely. awesome job as always james.
|
|
|
|
|
Jun 25 2005, 03:41 PM
Post
#3
|
|
 ich heisse Meli. Group: Member Posts: 909 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,016 |
oh WOW, I like that... the last line especially. Wow. Awesome!
|
|
|
|
|
Jun 25 2005, 04:00 PM
Post
#4
|
|
 Newbie Group: Member Posts: 6 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 159,619 |
nice, very nice. I like it, good writing.
|
|
|
|
|
Jun 26 2005, 05:01 PM
Post
#5
|
|
 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
You never bore me James. It's funny how when you start reading poetry, ou see all these seemingly genious pieces.. and then you keep reading, and you see the same formula over and over and over again. You are not one of those writers.
Thank you James. Superb. |
|
|
|
|
Jun 26 2005, 05:11 PM
Post
#6
|
|
|
Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
thank you, lindsay!
<3 and everyone else, too |
|
|
|
|
Jul 9 2005, 01:47 AM
Post
#7
|
|
|
Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
great!
|
|
|
|
|
2 User(s) are reading this topic (2 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: