Little Flower, feedback please Options

[LoST SouL]

i think i have writers block or somtheing cause i cant write what youg guys think when i finished it i wanted 2 burn it

Little Flower

why can't i tell you
tell you how i feel
is any of this even real?
song of love and joy
of happyness and forever
the temptation of a boy
the fantasy of a girl
dreams
dreams of you
emotions hidden out of sight
i don't know wat to do
im a sad little girl
filled with fear and fright
thsi isnt a game
of hide and seek
your walk
your gaze
your stare
your eyes
it's time for you to go
yet memories of you will not die
as the days pass by
i know you can't see me cry
tell me what you feel
is it the same?
i don't think so
do you know?
no no no
but see iv'e said it
with the way i act
the way i look at you
a long night
long ago
in the snow
while the sun was up
and the clouds were down
a flower bloomed
from the ground
don't die little flower
stay with me
but see...
forever
isnt ment to be