new poem, read it, tell me what you think. Options

[__heartache]

I just wrote this about 2 minutes ago, as i was going on. tell me what you think, its not my favorie but its just what's on my mind right now, leave me some feedback.



I fell today. And I thought of you, right as i fell to rest my head on the warm and damp concrete.
Your face appeared, bright and gold. i wish to have touched you one last time, before you left me here. but i'll make it on my own. just when i think ill be ok, ill fall again and see your face.
it burns my eyes. i cant see through you. but i will get over you. and see the rest of what there's left for me to do. for me to choose. for me to go on and not wonder anymore.
i drank some of your poisoned blood. i kissed those toxic lips. they taste of brutality.
and i can see the way you'll never look at me.
you rest your eyes, you rest your head. then you leave and i'll never forger.
the imprint on my forearm, the mess you left when you left me.
i'll never forget. its so hard to forget.
now i remember sometimes, when you and i were fine.
we'd sit and ponder our lives ahead, we held each other hand in hand.
and i wish we were there now.
but i fell again and i cant get up. i'm stuck down here.
i wait for a helping hand to lift me up, and give me life.
then i will follow them and they will destroy this heart of glass; so fragile and delicate.
and once you drop it, it breaks.
this time i fell, and i did not break. i want to go end this, and go to the break down.
but this break down is broken and i can't find the end.
so i lay here to die, i torture myself, and begin to cry...