three imagery poems, about life and love |
three imagery poems, about life and love |
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Here three poems of mine.
Watching the Sunset - like a metaphor of love My Flight of Fear - also like a metaphor of both life and love (I actually came up with the last verse on a roller coaster) Forest Storm - similies of features of the one I love Watching the Sunset Fading light over the horizon The ending of another day The shadowed moon slowly rising Pushing the light of the sun away Blinking lights, on and off Winking their distance away at me Glowing and flickering, yellow and soft Showing how far my eye can see Purples and reds blended together In such simplicity one cannot believe Yet exists the immense complexity of whether Tears will form once more, to grieve Green pine needles decorating the view Interrupting the path that my eyes walk But the blinking lights are seen, they pierce through Optimism teasing me, again and again they mock I can see my own long hair blowing Fast and quick as the wind does desire Cool, soothing, and calm, it is flowing Yet inside me burns a slow, painful fire While the music I listen to is relaxing Not even it can ease my stomach’s fluttering Each and every day the churning is taxing The words that my mind continues sputtering Each sense of mine is filled with a spirit Lingering and reminiscence of one sight And a sound that echoes, I can always hear it Yet it is softer than a bird’s wings taking flight Reflecting in my eyes’ pool of tears Dripping and adding to it increasingly Comes, parading, my frights and fears It never stops, it’s now unceasingly Still watching the sun slowly slip under And the moon now joining the cluttering clouds I can hear in the distance a roaring thunder This makes it only worse; now faster my heart pounds How could a sight so wonderful and great Ever bring me so much excruciating pain? Now I can only sit here to watch and wait For my questions to have answers that can explain Darkness finally taking over, completely Me blind to the fire, I cannot see the light it does brew But those lights are still there, winking at me They want to remind me that it is all because of you My Flight of Fear Step right up, don’t be shy Come on my roller coaster ride Hand me your ticket, hop right in Buckle up, it will soon begin It’s too late now, you can’t turn back All you can do is follow the track Because the decisions that you have made Cannot be altered, cannot be changed Creaking slowly, the ride then starts And you hear a fierce pounding in your heart A darkness surrounds you, now you’re blind You can’t see what’s in front nor what’s behind It’s impossible to see what lies ahead And now you are completely full of dread What will strike? What will hit? You can’t know, but you can’t quit Crawling up a seemingly infinite hill Wind blowing in your face, oh, what a thrill! It’s so calming, peaceful and serene But it is not what it seems Leading you up, leading you on Hey, guess what, all along The higher you go, the harder you fall And there’s nothing you can do about it at all Prepare yourself, the car is turning down Speeding into a dive so fast; what to do now? You can’t stop, you must keep going No matter how surprising, you not knowing When it will end; will you fall forever With no sign of stopping whatsoever? Zoom! Going back up, now you’re climbing What can this be? You must be dying A loop-the-loop around and around Winding around your throat, you’re choking now No words emit, no words come out You can’t scream and you can’t shout You can’t show anybody else your pain Yet slowly but surely you go insane Swirling over and over once more This must be hell, you are sure Everything blowing by, going so fast Not slowing down, how long will this last? Twisting and diving down at the same time You feel so helpless that you want to cry Now you’re sick, so dizzy you feel The wounds you’re getting, will they ever heal? Again and again, around and around Forwards, backwards, and upside-down A sudden stop, the worst whiplash Your hopes and dreams ripped and smashed Fear stabbing you like a razor-sharp knife Slicing you with the most terrifying fright Why must we face life with a tattered heart? Cut, shattered and bruised, so torn apart Then you realize you’re upside-down, hanging there Why did this happen to you? It’s so unfair Not knowing what to expect, entering so blind You just didn’t know what you’d find Filled with regret, oh, you wish That you’d never ever bought that ticket You wish you could predict what you’re heading towards If only, if only time could tick backwards The ride starts back up, and you see a light! You reach out, trying to grasp it with all your might Bursting through the passageway You’re out of the night and into the day Collapsing as you stumble out of the car You think, “That was so strange and so bizarre” And tears forming in your eyes That’s when you finally realize Life isn’t only full of pleasurable thrills Don’t be ignorant of the bitter pain that kills There are not only happy and joyful emotions Some crash and surge like waves on the oceans Be the optimist; reflect on what you’ve gone through Think of what you know now and before how little you knew Perhaps this all was a very good thing Just imagine what your new knowledge will bring And also remember: life isn’t just a straight line It’s full of twists, turns, and paths that intertwine So are you scared that this is drawing near? Oh, be afraid, try my flight of fear Do you dare to risk, do you dare to try My roller coaster ride? Forest Storm Walking through a wood one day Glancing up at closing night Trying to seize my last chance To see a ray of faint sunlight Taking shelter under trees As a gentle rain begins Gliding slowly down my face – They are tears from within I am as dry as a desert But inside I feel so cold No raindrops have touched me Yet dripping wet is my soul Reminders of you everywhere You – drenching me so thick I look around and see you there But no, it’s just another trick Branches tangled through one another Intertwining here and there These branches only make me think of Your tousled wavy brown hair Lightening striking my road ahead Only makes me louder my cries Because then you creep into my head Those arresting yellow-green eyes The thunder crashing makes my heart Pound at a faster pace And also when the only thing I see Is your delicate spellbinding face Every day I think of you It’s my mind that you haunt I need you out; you’re killing me This I do not want How to escape the battering rain Pouring from the sky above? I’m already wet and it’s all because Of what I did for love Sprinting through the falling storm Mud seeping through my skin I want to wash away my thoughts of you And tomorrow be dry – once again begin Please tell me what you think! |
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