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poem: Let it fall, tell me what you think
Dabme
post May 28 2005, 06:54 PM
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Let it Fall


I cant stop thinking of
When it rained that night
I thought I knew the meaning of love
And I believed I was right

A voice whispered into my ear
An crepted into my heart
"Hold her tight,hold her near"
Thats when it began to start

I had this obsession inside of me
And Lied to you straight to your face
Didnt want you to see
So our love began to erase

I felt so empty deep down inside
You were drifting away
While I was trying to hide
You didnt know what to say

Talking didnt work
I was confused in my mind
Why does love hurt?
This answer was hard to find

I didnt know you any more
Not as I use to
I felt so unsure
Didnt know what to do

Just as rain is cold
So was I
I didntt want your hand to hold
So I made you cry

Now water falls down on me
It makes me feel the pain
But yet I finaly see
I am the rain
 

Posts in this topic
guessewho   poem: Let it fall   May 28 2005, 06:54 PM
xKait13x   Wow, that's really good...   May 28 2005, 09:11 PM
yukichan   wow thats good..kinda sad though.. good job!   May 29 2005, 04:12 AM
xFaith   wow thats beautiful :)   May 29 2005, 05:11 AM
hollesther   Wow,that was a really great poem   May 30 2005, 10:14 PM
guessewho   thx alot everyone   May 31 2005, 01:47 PM
ItzOnlySydney   great poem and i really felt this one =)   Jun 4 2005, 02:15 AM


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