Ecstasy, No it's not about drugs |
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 May 18 2005, 10:58 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Every day I reminisce
About the way I held you in my arms Close to my heart, close to me I held you with the highest regard You'll always be the one I treasure In my heart and soul; forever Whenever I sit down to relax I still remember the time When we stood out in the rain And kissed under the blanket of the sky These are the kind of memories That I keep within my heart These were the times when I Could be caught in the entangled web Of ecstasy called love An eternal high that can never fade As long as you're by my side And in my arms |
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May 19 2005, 11:35 PM
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 durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
I love the metaphor "blanket of the sky" --- Immediately I thought of the light blue skies, with tiny puffballs of clouds.. ;D Yay hyperbole :D
The message delivered.. it's so simple, yet so powerful. I simply adore love poems. :] |
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May 19 2005, 11:38 PM
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 Donna-chan Group: Member Posts: 1,183 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 120,389 |
so lovey dovey
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May 20 2005, 01:36 AM
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very nicely done...i like it. very simple but gets the concept across quite well. great job.
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May 20 2005, 10:53 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
=D Thanks you guys...I appreciate the feedback. Yay..Simple is what I was looking for.
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May 21 2005, 12:44 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
hahaha your saying ims tuck on that subject??? lol good sh*t though i like it you should check out my other writings XD
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