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| *suddenly she* |
 May 18 2005, 06:43 PM
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it's my first vector. i'm not so sure if i should call it completed or not. i wrote "or something" because it's not really how you're supposed to do it, according to the tutorial i was using (it wasn't on cb). so i had to outline everything.
i didn't really like the layered look when it came to skin tone, so that's why it looks kinda goofy. http://acoustical.deviantart.com/scraps/ it's the one with the black/gray/white background. i don't have illustrator.  original picture so what should i do, or what could i do better or akdjsf?  
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May 18 2005, 06:46 PM
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 something more  Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
Actually, thats very good as being your first! I like how it is! Good job! Leyrs on the hair would be nice, but it still looks nice without it, so yeah. Great job.
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May 18 2005, 06:55 PM
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 I watch you while you sleep. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,068 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,685 |
Wow, that is really good for a first vexel. Nice job! I can't wait to see more of your work.
xo, Pauline edit: The only criticism I have for you is about the shading of his shirt. The shadows of the creases of the fabric (since the shirt is striped) should be two colors instead of just a solid gray. To achieve this, you should set the opacity of the gray shapes to a lower percentage (10-20%). |
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May 18 2005, 07:04 PM
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whoa
 that's wondeful! great job!
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| *suddenly she* |
May 18 2005, 07:33 PM
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QUOTE(PAULiNE_x @ May 18 2005, 7:55 PM) edit: The only criticism I have for you is about the shading of his shirt. The shadows of the creases of the fabric (since the shirt is striped) should be two colors instead of just a solid gray. To achieve this, you should set the opacity of the gray shapes to a lower percentage (10-20%).  that makes sense and i know what you're saying.. but i don't know how. hopefully, it's possible on photoshop (as stated above, i don't have illustrator), but i don't know the program really well. would it look the same if i made the color darker?thanks for the comments! 
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May 18 2005, 07:40 PM
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 NO. I'm not 13. or 14. or 15. or 16. Group: Member Posts: 4,616 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,577 |
Oh that's great for your first
 You can develop your own style with vectors. I really like this style =] |
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| *stephinika* |
May 18 2005, 07:49 PM
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i have to agree, that looks really great for your first! i love it. keep up the awesome work.
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May 18 2005, 08:26 PM
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 Froggie! Woof woof. :D Group: Member Posts: 1,423 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,146 |
it looks awesome! the shirt is kinda funky. =P
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May 18 2005, 09:01 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 6,953 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 52,702 |
has a casual look...but it hink you should take out the outline
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May 18 2005, 09:20 PM
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 durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
Pretty good for your first! Wow and the image is so tiny! Being able to vexel it must've been tough! The second one, I like how you outlined around him.. It makes it look unique. Very cool. Can't wait to see the finished product!
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| *suddenly she* |
May 18 2005, 09:44 PM
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the problem is that i don't know what else to do..
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May 18 2005, 09:48 PM
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durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
^ Vexel the buildings? Maybe.. idk lol.
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May 18 2005, 10:00 PM
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 ich heisse Meli. Group: Member Posts: 909 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,016 |
ooh, I really like the outlines, and how the buildings are so simplistic next to him. Nice!! especially for a FIRST!!
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Jun 4 2005, 10:15 PM
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 Go to Tahiti, and make out with a native. Group: Duplicate Posts: 914 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,267 |
that is really cool!!!!
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