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 May 12 2005, 04:56 PM
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 Amberific.  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772  |
Done for a challenge. I don't really like it, but eh, what can you do? Any critique/criticism would be greatly appreciated. It features this chick named Charlene Choi (I have no idea who she is or what she's famous for).
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May 12 2005, 05:12 PM
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 HAAAAAAAA. Group: Member Posts: 4,472 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,068 |
I love it, the colors are so wow. Great job.
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May 12 2005, 05:38 PM
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My name is Jason, not imafreakinazn D: Group: Member Posts: 2,008 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,432 |
oh, wow!
i'm really loving this! i love how each portion has a different color/gradient overlay! i love it!
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May 12 2005, 05:39 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
oooh! I like it!! I Like the colors and i like the way you blended it together. Thats really nice!
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| *mona lisa* |
May 12 2005, 05:43 PM
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Wow, Carrie, that is nice. I love how the bottom image is dark and the other pictures look angelic. Very beautiful!
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May 12 2005, 05:44 PM
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 NO. I'm not 13. or 14. or 15. or 16. Group: Member Posts: 4,616 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,577 |
I LOVE this. =]
The colors, the faded images in the back, everything 
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May 12 2005, 05:54 PM
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 sugar + spice + everything kinky. Group: Member Posts: 161 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,665 |
she's a singer from this chinese group called twins. nice blend ;]
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May 12 2005, 05:57 PM
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 This bitch better work! Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,681 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,095 |
oh...that is very nice looking. i like the colors and the pic at the bottom is beautiful. great job.
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May 12 2005, 06:29 PM
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gigi =p Group: Member Posts: 3,679 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,206 |
Gorgeous, m'dear. Love the fadedness and colours!
Charlene Choi is part of a singing duo named Twins who are very popular in Hong Kong, by the way. =) |
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May 12 2005, 06:30 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
its amazing, i love all the colors
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May 12 2005, 06:38 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
That is absolutely gorgeous!
I love the colors and how the images in the background are all light, and that one at the bottom stands out. It's lovely.
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| *stephinika* |
May 12 2005, 06:52 PM
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very pretty. i love the effects and the colours you used.
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May 12 2005, 07:50 PM
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Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
Eeee!!!!! <- happy outburst
Thanks everyone!!!!!!  I'm so glad y'all like it.
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May 12 2005, 08:17 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 6,953 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 52,702 |
i don't like how it is dark the light...but it kinda look like memories though
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May 12 2005, 08:38 PM
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 durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
Oooh it's gorgeous! I love your use of subtle hues...
And I like hwo the bottom picture stands out the most. Very cool! Charlene Choi is gorgeous, whoever she is! She has that sophisticated, beautiful look. Cool blend! :D
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May 12 2005, 08:50 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
nice choice of pictures / colors. i like the quote too =)
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May 12 2005, 09:08 PM
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 Um....Its meeee Group: Member Posts: 2,218 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,264 |
Vey nice. I like the colors and how you postion around the bottom picture. Is really pretty. Nice job.
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May 12 2005, 09:34 PM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
 Great Job I love the colors and I like the way you positioned everything
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May 13 2005, 02:24 AM
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 layout whore Group: Member Posts: 1,031 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,756 |
its quite lovely. the compostion isvery nice, i love the color choices. The typography is VERY nice, clean and simple. GREAT JOB!!
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May 13 2005, 02:29 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 198 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 132,296 |
serious... people are just being too nice
or maybe its just me i just straight out dont like it at all... tints, shades, hues, sharpness, naw doesnt look good at all beautiful singer.. bad collagraph |
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May 13 2005, 02:33 AM
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layout whore Group: Member Posts: 1,031 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,756 |
QUOTE(T_R_G @ May 13 2005, 2:29 AM) serious... people are just being too nice or maybe its just me i just straight out dont like it at all... tints, shades, hues, sharpness, naw doesnt look good at all beautiful singer.. bad collagraph  why....explain urself fully so that she can get somthing out of this critique other than u dont like it. That doesnt help anyone out at all. |
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May 13 2005, 02:36 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 198 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 132,296 |
QUOTE(jacksparrowsgirl03 @ May 13 2005, 12:33 AM) why....explain urself fully so that she can get somthing out of this critique other than u dont like it. That doesnt help anyone out at all. i did i dont know what she can do to make it look good im saying everything needs working with... tints, shades, hues, sharpness, focus, the "fadedness" maybe organize everything a little better or maybe if shes going for the more abstract type thing overlap the pics more add more or and scatter them. hard for me to explain... "so much potential in art" i just dont know how to put it down lol |
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May 13 2005, 02:47 AM
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layout whore Group: Member Posts: 1,031 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,756 |
fadedness??? its called opacity......and u cant do much about focus on pics collected off the internet. A better critique would not just say work on tints and shades etc. You could say something like, use warmer tones or cooler tones.....Name a specific part of the compostion that you disagree with and then say what you would do to make it better. Btw, no matter is something is abstracted or collaged, there is still organization in it. What do u mean by putting 'so much potential in art' and in quotations?? anyway, in my opinion, things are organized very well, she is working in thirds obviously, and her images are all different sizes and opacities. There is a nice triangular formation that brings the viewer's eye around the composition without getting stuck in one area. I have one suggestion though...the image in the far left top corner I would flip it to face the opposite direction. That way the triangular/circular motion of the composition is more complete. I love how her typography has different weights and kernings as well. It flows very smoothly. anyway...T_R_G, that is how you critique a piece of artwork..say what u like about it and dont like about it...AND WHY??? Give suggestions, praise, and then be on ur way.
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May 13 2005, 04:25 AM
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 .bubblicious inspirations. @ www.bubbliciousoul.com Group: Member Posts: 466 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,228 |
hm.... it's nice...but i guess if u want to make changes, i'd say the colors don't flow well enough, like it still looks like 3 pictures in one kinda of.. maybe just work on it a little more.. but i really like how it's coming out though.
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May 13 2005, 04:50 AM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
That is just, wow.
I really love it. |
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