poem about pompeii, what do you think? |
poem about pompeii, what do you think? |
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Just so you people know, I rarely ever write poems, and I'm not a great story writer...but tell me what you think of this poem and give some suggestions on how i could make it better, having problems with thinking of good ending... It's about pompeii when mount vesuvius erupts...
As I walk through the streets of Rome, I think of the place I used to call home, I wish it was the way it had been, But I know Pompeii will never be seen, It’s all buried now in dirty ash, It was the angered gods that made it trash, And thus I walk through the streets of Rome, Thinking of the place I used to call home. |
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