you ARE the 1, throw ur feelings in |
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 <-[RaWR]->  Group: Member Posts: 180 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,133  |
I wrote this poem originaly to be a "happy" love poem for my girlfriend but we kind of grew apart so I changed it to a sad poem. Besides I could never give it to her because I was waiting for the right time. Guess it never came and I carried it around in my wallet wherever I went. We werent meant to be.
You were there when I needed you I was there when you needed me Does this mean our love is true Or are we not meant to be? Listen to your heart Please pay attention I dont want to be apart Those words I will not mention But to you I give my love And to you I say please stay See god sent you from up above Awaiting for this day So if you want to leave me I can let you go I guess there never was a "we" And I guess I'll never know -me |
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May 5 2005, 05:53 PM
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 crushed. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,432 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,026 |
wow, that's pretty =]
but I believe this belongs in the writing forum. |
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May 5 2005, 05:53 PM
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 reluctantly gazing Group: Member Posts: 472 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 120,555 |
thats sweet, but yes that belongs in the writing forum. will someone move it please?
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May 5 2005, 10:11 PM
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 <3 Group: Member Posts: 3,657 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 64,493 |
QUOTE(bballbabiegrl @ May 5 2005, 5:53 PM) wow that's really good. great job 
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May 5 2005, 11:38 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 59 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 132,559 |
i use to get poems from my ex all the time when we were dating..........and compared to urs.....his sound like such crap......thats probably the prettiest poem i've heard in a while! thanks for sharing
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May 6 2005, 01:29 AM
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 .bubblicious inspirations. @ www.bubbliciousoul.com Group: Member Posts: 466 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,228 |
i like it... it's simple but conveys great meanings. yeh i think it shud be moved to the writing forum too.
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May 6 2005, 06:33 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
aww..that's really nice. but yes, it should be moved to the writing forum.
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May 6 2005, 08:28 AM
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 Grrrrrrr Group: Member Posts: 801 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 123,696 |
I like it. Its really good
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May 6 2005, 09:48 AM
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very pretty and sad poem...remember to just put it in the proper next time.
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May 6 2005, 10:30 AM
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 sweet but sour Group: Member Posts: 170 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,953 |
aww thats so cute but sad.
 rlly good poem!
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May 6 2005, 05:02 PM
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<-[RaWR]-> Group: Member Posts: 180 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,133 |
thanx yeah I know its in the wrong forum
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| *iNyCxShoRT* |
May 6 2005, 09:41 PM
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i love it =)
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Jun 5 2005, 09:48 AM
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 Idiot Group: Member Posts: 53 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,886 |
that's a really good poem
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| *Kathleen* |
Jun 6 2005, 01:13 PM
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Aww. Don't worry - there'll be someone out there that's really for you.
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