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| *islandgirl4eva* |
 May 5 2005, 09:11 AM
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When I look into the mirror
And all I see is me I find it quite disturbing I'm not who I want to be I gaze into my bitter eyes Missing tender innocence lost Realizing how fast time flies How much to my soul it cost I notice my cheeks Where the tears once fell Still lined with wet streaks I read the story they tell My lips still shiver From the words I spoke And as my voice quivers My volition broke As I see my face It breaks my heart For at such a rapid pace I've fallen apart |
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May 5 2005, 09:43 AM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth  Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
that's such a sad poem, in a way.
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May 5 2005, 03:31 PM
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A melancholy poem...
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| *stephinika* |
May 5 2005, 07:05 PM
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so sadly sweet...naomi, i love it. very nicely done.
  ilu! 
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May 10 2005, 06:16 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
it's such a sad poem =(
it reminds me of a quote that goes "she finally lets go of her fake smile as tears slowly fall and she whispers i dont want to be me" |
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May 13 2005, 09:43 PM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
Aww, that was really awesome.
I love it. =) |
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May 15 2005, 04:21 PM
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 Shutup before I smack you. Group: Member Posts: 119 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 136,015 |
aww. . that seems so sad.
but I always believed people should be appreciated for what they are and have now. ;] |
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