english buffs...i need help!, BIG TIME! plz read! |
 Apr 27 2005, 06:58 PM
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 i <3 peter  Group: Member Posts: 744 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 125,986  |
k well i did a biiig long story for english class 3 pages long, (its about kip and lafawnduh from napoleon dynamite, hehe) and my friend says she thinks i wrote it in the 2nd person, and my friend* told me our english teacher told her that we couldn't write in 2nd person because its the "wrong way to write a story" or something. read this part of my story and plz tell me if its 2nd or 3rd person??! thx!!
QUOTE Kip and Napoleon took all of their traveling bags, while Lafawnduh and Deb talked. "So what do you do?" asked Deb. "I'm a cosmetologist!", said Lafawnduh. "Wow, that's great!", she replied."And what do you do?" asked Lafawnduh. "Still doing the glamourshots?". "Yeah, we have gotten a lot of business lately! Maybe later I could get a portrait of you and Kip together!", Deb said. "OK, that would be great, thanks!", said Lafawnduh.
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KERP1UNK english buffs...i need help! Apr 27 2005, 06:58 PM
pAtRiCk_sTar That's third person, you did it correct.
Fi... Apr 27 2005, 07:01 PM KERP1UNK thx u very much!! yay! :D Apr 27 2005, 07:52 PM
tooeffingcrazy QUOTE(KERP1UNK @ Apr 27 2005, 7:52 PM)thx u v... Apr 27 2005, 08:27 PM ChasingLife87 The only thing is that you need to, every time a n... Apr 27 2005, 08:09 PM  |
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