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The Lonely Child, a poem
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post Apr 21 2005, 08:06 PM
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theres a kid at my school that is just like this

Broken is the heart of the lonely child
Solid on the surface, tender and mild
Fallin to pieces inside, fallin apart
bless this lonely child with his lonely heart

The deepest of sadness, lurks behinds his eyes
Hides behind his fake smile, and little white lies
And keeps a brave face, and his world falls apart
Bless this lonely child with his lonely heart

Bullied, beaten, and teased by all of his peers
His everyday reality, is our deepest of fears
Outcasted at school, his family fallin apart
Bless this lonely child with his lonely heart

Hard to get up in the morning, why should he try?
No reasons to live, gives him more reasons to die
The world doesnt know, hes irrevirsably scarred
Bless this lonely child, with his lonely heart

Wallowing in pity, drowning in sorrow
Crying in bed, awaiting tommorow
For another day worthless living to partake
Bless this lonely child, whos ready to break

He's only happy, as he's dreaming away
Oblivious to the torture, he endured that day
A smile spreads, as he pictures life without sorrow
Bless this lonely child, who dreams of a better tommorow!

He's tired of praying, to God all in vain
He slits open his wrists, and lets out the pain
A sick twisted smile, curls onto his face
Whats wrong with the lonely child, who cant find his place?

Every single tear he ever shed
He replaces it with blood--and so he bled
So He layed dying, in a pool of crimson hate
It was his own doing, not a matter of fate

The blood flowed freely, as his pain shows
He feels dizzy, as his breathing slows
He took his last agonizing breath, and closed his eyes
And was cleansed of the hate and the lies

He Layed Dead, Still With A Sick Smile On His Face
Finally at Peace, Bless This Lonely Child, Who Now Found His Place
 

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SoManyTearz   The Lonely Child   Apr 21 2005, 08:06 PM
wounded   that was, like, wow. Amazing. You're really ta...   Apr 21 2005, 08:08 PM
SoManyTearz   thank you very much. i appreciate it, anyone else?   Apr 21 2005, 08:11 PM
gladz612   wow... this is awsome...   Apr 21 2005, 11:33 PM
SoManyTearz   thank you very much i do try hard when it comes to...   Apr 22 2005, 12:18 AM
x3__iGiVEup   WOW; that's amazing. i think maybe you should ...   Apr 22 2005, 06:27 PM
MiLKDUD_DOKiE   you should have that published. im serious   Apr 22 2005, 06:29 PM
DaToNeViEtBoI916   I like it a lot. Powerful. The repetition was a ...   Apr 22 2005, 06:36 PM
skateforfree   i really like it its one of the bst ive heard   Apr 22 2005, 09:50 PM
agirlnamed_aly   Wow. Just wow. That was really powerful. Like DaT...   Apr 23 2005, 01:43 AM
pingpang_0811   QUOTEThe deepest of sadness, lurks behinds his eye...   Apr 23 2005, 08:59 AM
xbr0kensmil3   omg.. that was amazing. i love it.   Apr 23 2005, 12:36 PM
stephinika   wonderful. it was so powerful and emotional with t...   Apr 23 2005, 04:46 PM
Spiritual Winged Aura   omg, he killed himself ? the ending was interestin...   Apr 23 2005, 06:07 PM
yukichan   wow... i really like it.. its so sad.. u should ge...   Apr 23 2005, 08:46 PM
IamRad   thats freaking good.. keep up the good work   Apr 23 2005, 09:29 PM
SoManyTearz   thank you so much everyone, really i appreciate it...   Apr 23 2005, 09:44 PM
toodlepops.   That's awesome, you obviously have some talent...   Apr 25 2005, 12:23 AM
nightmare4taki   Wow all I have to say is splendid. Honestly I must...   Apr 25 2005, 05:16 PM
Sweet_Kiwi1992   I think the reason the story is so good is because...   Apr 26 2005, 02:04 PM
pinayprincess   OH SH*T! -- thats really sad/depressing --- go...   Apr 26 2005, 05:53 PM


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