life as we forget it, a pretentious, arty poem |
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 Apr 16 2005, 07:11 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
life as we forget it
breathe the ocean and sing the flames scorch the fire drown the rains live for the sandstorm be for the wind sob for the laughter and laugh through the pain hide in the fog the hour class drips sand the time is running out the swans coming in to land breaking the change the shifting sea of same hold onto the cliff face you'll never be young again lol... my goodness... someone was feeling artistic this morning... |
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Apr 16 2005, 01:48 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Oooooh, I really like that, James!
Lovely work, very artistic. |
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Apr 16 2005, 03:14 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow i like it!i like the laugh through the pain part..
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Apr 16 2005, 03:17 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Apr 16 2005, 7:11 AM) life as we forget it breathe the ocean and sing the flames scorch the fire drown the rains live for the sandstorm be for the wind  I really, really love your words. It's almost as if you shake awake forgotten meanings sometimes. Like whispers of faeries and dwarfs and rings of dancing men can be found in school yards and cement streets... It's not this piece in particular... I just love what you write. :D |
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Apr 16 2005, 03:20 PM
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ooh, i love it james! i really, really do. the words you used are well-chosen and the images that come to mind are great. well done as usual.
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