Miles apart, .for you? me? us? |
 Apr 13 2005, 06:40 PM
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 pull my finger..  Group: Member Posts: 71 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,414  |
miles couldnt cover how far we are apart
but ill always keep a place for you in my heart i would take a rocket to the sky and breathe upon a sigh and when the land between us divides ill only want you by my side that one blundered kiss from a window makes time for me go so slow the wonderful joy of you on my mind the one special girl, one of a kind cant say i love you for love is too strong not yet to be said but to wait and long i always wished for a girl who was true and so i guess thats why god gave me you      
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Apr 13 2005, 06:42 PM
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 I have no life Group: Member Posts: 1,119 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,675 |
Writing section>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Apr 13 2005, 06:45 PM
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 highfive. Group: Member Posts: 1,301 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,951 |
Aw. That's a really sweet poem.. but why is it in pictures?
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Apr 13 2005, 06:50 PM
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pull my finger.. Group: Member Posts: 71 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,414 |
argg man thats booty.. i never pay attention.. i swear i thought i was in writing..
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Apr 13 2005, 06:58 PM
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 insanitys contagious. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,210 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,707 |
really good but yeah , writing section.
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Apr 13 2005, 07:12 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
The words "Miles Apart" remind me of "Miles Apart - Yellowcard"
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Apr 13 2005, 07:51 PM
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 SCHGEB!SCHGEB! Group: Member Posts: 1,786 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,217 |
umm wrong forum...it goes in writing section =)
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Apr 13 2005, 08:16 PM
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My name is Jason, not imafreakinazn D: Group: Member Posts: 2,008 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,432 |
i'm sorry. but you have the wrong forum.
but that's a lovely poem!  you're an awesome writer! |
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Apr 13 2005, 08:19 PM
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Haha, yes, wrong forum. But it's okay
I'm sure mods will move it sooner or later.Wonderful writing, though. It's really sweet. |
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Apr 13 2005, 09:38 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
lovely poem :) Very touching...
no idea why it's in the pictures forum. lol but still it's great. :) " always wished for a girl who was true and so i guess thats why god gave me you" -wonderful ending :) Keep it up. |
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Apr 13 2005, 09:45 PM
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 3,565, you n00bs ain't got nothin' on me. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,761 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,565 |
damn. that is a sweeeeeeeeeet poem.
it is really nice. i love it. you are talented. |
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| *mzkandi* |
Apr 13 2005, 10:36 PM
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wrong forum this should be in the writing section but it is very sweet.
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Apr 14 2005, 03:02 AM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
really nice, but wrong forum
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Apr 14 2005, 06:57 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
lovely poem, but wrong forum.
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| *Weird addiction* |
Apr 14 2005, 07:04 AM
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was that for me? awww great poem
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Apr 14 2005, 12:50 PM
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 muted imperfections <3 Group: Official Member Posts: 3,295 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,260 |
wow thats some good writing.
topic moved to Writing  jackie
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Apr 14 2005, 02:03 PM
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 deleted Group: Member Posts: 3,168 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 92,276 |
aww
 how sweet. great job!
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