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Miles apart, .for you? me? us?
ChaOzXx
post Apr 13 2005, 06:40 PM
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miles couldnt cover how far we are apart
but ill always keep a place for you in my heart
i would take a rocket to the sky
and breathe upon a sigh
and when the land between us divides
ill only want you by my side
that one blundered kiss from a window
makes time for me go so slow
the wonderful joy of you on my mind
the one special girl, one of a kind
cant say i love you for love is too strong
not yet to be said but to wait and long
i always wished for a girl who was true
and so i guess thats why god gave me you

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cocoalightning27
post Apr 13 2005, 06:42 PM
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Writing section>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
 
to-devastate
post Apr 13 2005, 06:45 PM
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Aw. That's a really sweet poem.. but why is it in pictures?
 
ChaOzXx
post Apr 13 2005, 06:50 PM
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argg man thats booty.. i never pay attention.. i swear i thought i was in writing..

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EmmalieV
post Apr 13 2005, 06:58 PM
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really good but yeah , writing section.
 
loljuliana
post Apr 13 2005, 07:12 PM
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The words "Miles Apart" remind me of "Miles Apart - Yellowcard"
 
IamRad
post Apr 13 2005, 07:51 PM
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umm wrong forum...it goes in writing section =)
 
imafreakinazn
post Apr 13 2005, 08:16 PM
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i'm sorry. but you have the wrong forum.
but that's a lovely poem!
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you're an awesome writer!
 
*jooleeah*
post Apr 13 2005, 08:19 PM
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Haha, yes, wrong forum. But it's okay happy.gif I'm sure mods will move it sooner or later.

Wonderful writing, though. It's really sweet.
 
KissMe2408
post Apr 13 2005, 09:38 PM
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lovely poem :) Very touching...
no idea why it's in the pictures forum. lol but still it's great. :)

" always wished for a girl who was true
and so i guess thats why god gave me you"
-wonderful ending :) Keep it up.
 
juliar
post Apr 13 2005, 09:45 PM
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damn. that is a sweeeeeeeeeet poem.


it is really nice. i love it. you are talented.
 
*mzkandi*
post Apr 13 2005, 10:36 PM
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wrong forum this should be in the writing section but it is very sweet.
 
toodlepops.
post Apr 14 2005, 03:02 AM
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really nice, but wrong forum
 
misoshiru
post Apr 14 2005, 06:57 AM
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lovely poem, but wrong forum.
 
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post Apr 14 2005, 07:04 AM
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was that for me? awww great poem flowers.gif
 
f00LisH_h3aRt63
post Apr 14 2005, 12:50 PM
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wow thats some good writing.

topic moved to Writing

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ItzOnlySydney
post Apr 14 2005, 02:03 PM
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aww cry.gif how sweet. great job!
 

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