Wishing on A Star, Small Town Dreams, Shot Down |
 Apr 3 2005, 03:10 PM
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 Do you miss your little girl?  Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851  |
Waiting on a star to call my own,
Looking for a place to call my "home." I look for a class to drown in, Nothing challanges you if you can swim. Hopelessly waiting for my star, "Dreaming won't get you far!" Ignore the words they say, Tomorrow's a brand new day. You've had me branded since you met me, "How hopeless can one person be?!" I've stumbled and fell, Lost my grip and went to hell. I've grown strong, "This is where you belong." You've stayed with me here, Dry your lonely tears. |
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Apr 3 2005, 03:47 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow..i really like it..good job...
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Apr 3 2005, 06:21 PM
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Good Poem.. It inspires me. I want to go write some poems now
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Apr 4 2005, 06:53 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
haha.. thanks. Just looking for my way out of this hell hole.
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Apr 4 2005, 08:26 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
i know what you mean. i hate it where i live. the poem is great though. really inspirational
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| *salcha* |
Apr 5 2005, 02:01 AM
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i hate where i live too
still looking for my "home" too. |
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Apr 6 2005, 04:27 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
QUOTE(smthngcrprategrl34 @ Apr 4 2005, 8:26 PM) i know what you mean. i hate it where i live. the poem is great though. really inspirational  Problem for me is my family is a pretty dominant, older family here. Every knows my dad. So, I never can go any where with him without being stopped. And, everyone knows about my mum and they all know my brother and sister, but they're like, "I didn't know you had another daughter!"  Thanks, dad. Love you too.
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Apr 6 2005, 11:39 PM
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 atleast pretend to care? Group: Member Posts: 262 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,176 |
Sweeeettttt` <33
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Apr 7 2005, 02:25 PM
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Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
Haha. Thanks. :)
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