can someone rate my freestyle too? Options

[*Statistik*]

IF YOU GUYS THINK THAT OTHER DUDE IS ME ITS NOT. feel free to check the ip.

well my freestyle is hotta than his and y'all know it..and ill prove it here

You be lying to createblog like you got a long pipe
Had me screaming last night man dude you outta sight
I don't give a f**k about you; you know I am for real
And you just know how I feel you can f**k me on da pill
Nigga let me hit you weed satisfaction guarantee
You can call me crazy boy took that nigga for his weed
Please listen to da truth kangsta thats right
Understand this shit been nasty trick on fools
You and nothing to me Ím a f**king M.C.
I can recognize a groupie when I see her in front of me
I don't mine if you bust a nut you deserved it
I think you just got served boy, give it up already
All dat shit dat you be doing trying to bust me wide open
Eat my shit nigga you know I got to have that tongue in motion

[*Statistik*]

^

I cook white like a good chef cook roast,
If i'm not the best at this 411 shit im real close,
If not post a reply and let me know,
Cuz im zone'n right now spittin raps wit ghosts,
And they tell me wat i need to know bout da game,
they tell me my results of makin it to heaven,i have no shame,
Cuz the way im livin' right now,even demons know me by name,
So i was always looked passed as a youngsta,
Satan slept in my room,didn't have a closet monsta,
u were born fake like a gay was born straight
so unlosen ur belt and put ur jeans a lil below ur waist
and cuff ur paints a da bottom
but nigga if i like dem, i'ma make u come up out dem
cause im on my bottom dolla
f**k da holla, i need a profit

[jnukes]

And one more thing, this shit ain't real, it's a game that no one plays../
It's the internet, from now on 'e-' should be on every phrase../
So like you say, when I e-step to you then I'll e-perish../
But I ain't e-scared, e-steppin' to you's somethin' that I e-cherish../

those were tight lines .. haha .. i mean .. tight e-lines .. heheh ..

[*Statistik*]

IF ANYONE steps up their guts to face me right now right here let me know..im heat up on fiah..

[azn_r4pf4n]

IF ANYONE steps up their guts to face me right now right here let me know..im heat up on fiah..

*starts laughing*


im glad i dont rap that much here no more.

[*Statistik*]

Yo haters..yo azn rap fan ya..
I know you hated my freestyle rap since the first
so just sit your ass down, watch the monitor and check out my next verse
Pop you with my marines make your body burst
Imma snatch your minerals like a purse
so dont f**k with the kangsta it's a god damn curse
Second verse
u thought last time was bad ,this is worst
its like a curse
unleashing the ghost
spreadin the most
havoc, and destruction
after im finished wit u
you'll beg for tax reduction
theres nothin
that kills me more than u get on AOL thinkin u hard
Its tha Benefit
i got my mack10 bitch taken the hit
im makin u bitches quit
azn dont talk shit bout me no more im bringin u 2 the end

[azn_r4pf4n]

haha. should i?













currently crackalat'n \\
another one of his statements \\
making \\ one of the most silliest moves i've seen \\
please \\ at least i don't make lies like you \\
making funny claims \\
and putting that on your resume \\
when you know you're truely afraid \\
heard if you saw fifty on the street, you would run off dismayed \\
pretty silly you're promoting what should be called a waste \\
better yet, you make hip-hop a disgrace \\



.....






im not freestylin anymore, im just one of them pplz laufin at u cuz of the fact u keep making those "claims" like "fans all over the country"

[*CrackedRearView*]

Never fear azn_rapfan, the real poet's here../
To show all you folks how Tool and Jason should appear../
We've all established that neither kiddy really seems to have a clue../
One's looks like he's about 12, and the other's black n' blue../
From all the verbal beatings I've been givin' and I've dished out../
It's all too clear at this point, CRV's the guy with clout../
These other fools just run their mouths with raps that hardly make sense../
Keep bringin' Michael Jackson into it, like they jump to his defense../
Little Jason did it twice, this dipshit Taki did it too, /
No one cares about this sick ass child molester, why do you?/
I'm sorry that I hurt your feelings and I crushed pride../
But I couldn't just sit here ..... I couldn't let it slide../
I had take the role of bearer of the bad news../
My job is just to bring you kids your needed cues and clues../
It's obvious that Taki's just another worthless e-slob../
And Jason - your raps suck so don't give up your day job./

[azn_r4pf4n]

Never fear azn_rapfan, the real poet's here../

rofl. never fear, haha.

It's obvious that Taki's just another worthless e-slob../
And Jason - your raps suck so don't give up your day job./

haha

[Rachel]

Jason
Your azn
Shut up
Now

[*Statistik*]

yo im gettin in the game
dont bother joining, itll put you in shame
even if you do, ill finish off you
these things are going through my head
better think about what i just said
this rap battles no contest
you diss me and youll end up in a mess
your gonna wish you neva even started
cuz in the end, youll just be retarded
come on now just admit defeat
you know you cant eva compete
now im gonna stay till the end
come on suckas, go tell ya lovers and friends

[*CrackedRearView*]

Jesus Christ, kid. You're so stupid...

[*Statistik*]

^got damn u callin me a kid? stfu man and give rap up. u nothing and ur worse than j-kwon

[azn_r4pf4n]

yo im gettin in the game
dont bother joining, itll put you in shame
even if you do, ill finish off you
these things are going through my head
better think about what i just said
this rap battles no contest
you diss me and youll end up in a mess
your gonna wish you neva even started
cuz in the end, youll just be retarded
come on now just admit defeat
you know you cant eva compete
now im gonna stay till the end
come on suckas, go tell ya lovers and  friends

wow... lets quote rhymes.

yo im gettin in the game
dont bother joining, itll put you in shame

hmm, doesn't really feel like it.

even if you do, ill finish off you
these things are going through my head

doesn't seem like anybody is finishing.

come on now just admit defeat
you know you cant eva compete

shut up.


to start with the criticism, if ur gonna freestyle, don't say "you know" or even assume. use facts at least to support your opinion. it's shocking u keep saying stuff like for example:

cuz in the end, youll just be retarded

gimme facts buddy. this doesn't seem obvious enough.

Keep bringin' Michael Jackson into it, like they jump to his defense../
Little Jason did it twice, this dipshit Taki did it too, /

at least he brung facts.


please give us facts to at least battle somebody good if its not that obvious of a diss. thank you.


- Francis

[me1issaaaa]

Wow. This is very entertaining.
And I'd have to agree with Justin on this one.
And that Jason kid....... exactly how old are you?
Wow. Just wow.

[Nugget]

^got damn u callin me a kid? stfu man and give rap up. u nothing and ur worse than j-kwon

haha honey no. . U give up rap..his betta then urs..heck WAY betta. and umm u R a kid..so dont tell lies...

i have to say im liking CrackedRearView..

umm jason..u are pathetic..i guess u started to 'Rap' about CRV because u wana get some attention and get some game..honey..no..please..stop..and u cant dress 'gangsta' wut so ever..i mean LOOK at you..even I can dress 'gangsta'

please

[*CrackedRearView*]

The difference between you and J-Kwon is that HE has a record deal.

[jnukes]

lets finish off jason ..


man your rhymes are so wack, they make no sense//
your raps cost as much as yo "man", 50 cents//
i'll tell you right now, you're a disgrace to asians//
this aint no "nightmare4taki" this is "nightmare4jason"//
in your pic in your sig you look like a nerd with glasses//
you a hustla ? i bet you haven't gotten ANY asses //
your avatar dared me to poke you, i did with my rhymes//
in fact, i poked you 61992 times //
add up your dirtiness in your rhymes, about 4 pages//
mine are clean and STILL kill and for all ages//
so i'ma end this right here, jason you're no competition//
you must be uptight like my butthole in this position//

[*CrackedRearView*]

i'll tell you right now, you're a disgrace to asians//
this aint no "nightmare4taki" this is "nightmare4jason"//

DAMN.

[WTFwasIthinking]

LMFAOOOOO............ BOTH OF YOU ARE WACK... YOU ARE WHAT KANYE WAS TALKING ABOUT IN "WACK NIGGAS"....

definitely... these cats are seriously pathetic.... learn to rhyme or don't do it at all... ya'll embarrassin' ya'll selves

f**kin' idiots... and why is this called "freestyle"??? umm... these are all writtens... learn what a f**kin' freestyle is before you attempt to call somethin' a freestyle...

ALL of ya'll are wack... lmfao

AND I'M OUT!

[Rachel]

man your rhymes are so wack, they make no sense//
your raps cost as much as yo "man", 50 cents//
i'll tell you right now, you're a disgrace to asians//
this aint no "nightmare4taki" this is "nightmare4jason"//
in your pic in your sig you look like a nerd with glasses//
you a hustla ? i bet you've gotten NO asses //
your avatar dared me to poke you, i did with my rhymes//
in fact, i poked you 61992 times //
add up your dirtiness in your rhymes, about 4 pages//
mine are clean and STILL kill and for all ages//
so i'ma end this right here, jason you're no competition//
you must be uptight like my butthole  in this position//

shit jason, your ass got told!

[*nightmare4taki*]

Let me adminster the final dose of ether/
If you dont like what im saying chances are you want like this either/
Let me give you a little rhthymatic illmatic verse/
I cant help it that i was born with the quintessence curse/
Jason im defacing and replacing you/
I thought i told you that pastor mason wouldnt have a chance of saving you/
Oh yeah and CRV i quoted your sh*t that was writtin/
I know the truth be hurtin you when i start spittin/
Your a homo dont worry as long as you do what i say i want tell/
Now thats the true definition of blackmail/
ANd Jason your nothing but a kindergarden drop out/
Tell me Why does 50 ride around in a bulletproof car if he has to hop out/
If you want to take this to school i get a plus you get a minus/
From now on CRV and Jason adress me as your hinus/
I got the speakers blasting outlasting all competition if thats what you really want to call it/
I make your suburban start swervin like a alchoholic/
Neither one of yall really want it/
You two keep steppin to me and get burned like chronic/
My freedom of speach is because of the first ammendment/
I really hope you two dont get offended/
SO CRV there is no need to hate/
This is manslaughter so We dont even need a judge to adjudicate/

[uLoVeMikeRoch]

Jesus you guys both suck,
and jason you give kangstas like me a bad name man...

[uLoVeMikeRoch]

Jason
Your azn
Shut up
Now

Sorry for the double post...

But whoa whoa whoa, whats that supposed to mean?
Is that a F*CKING RACIST COMMENT, because i am THIS CLOSE TO F*CKING GETTING PISSED.

[*CrackedRearView*]

Aight Tool, now let us do a little rundown../
You'z still dumb, you still suck, and now you bring the fun down?/
Fun's down cause now you'z startin' to rap like little Jason../
Must be because your preoccupation with d**k chasin'../
I know you chase dicks cause 'homo's all you've called me../
Man you talk about fags a lot, this gay shit's gonna stall me../
I don't know if I should bring myself around you anymore../
Don't want you grabbin' on my balls in the midst of verbal war../
I just don't swing that way Taki, and I'm sorry, find another../
Maybe you could try your dad? Maybe you could ask your brother?/
And way to butcher English language, you 'quintessence' of a fool../
Know the meaning of a word before you use it in a duel../
What's sad is now you've hit rock-bottom and you can't even rhyme../
So this time I'ma just convict you of your lyrical crime../
You've got the right to remain silent for the rest of the night../
Cause try'na rhyme 'want it' and 'chronic'..man it just ain't right../
Same goes for 'call it'/'alcoholic', 'amendment'/'offended'../
Obviously what little rhyming skill you had before has ended../
So one more time, man, why you here? What'chu think you gotta prove?/
If you can't rhyme with the big dogs then I just suggest you move../

[*nightmare4taki*]

Heere is a little sequal/
It is clear to see that we were not created equal/
Let me go ahead and finish you fast/
SInce its apparent you have your foot stuck up your ass/
Im black and your girl do me right/
THen be like damn how your kids so white/
Im cold blooded/
You either hate it or love it/
Im the betterman half pass a veterman how can you blame me/
Lyrically kill ya and have jason give you triple bypass like d**k chaney/
Chaos is what i cause Havoc is what i live/
CRV you dont have no d*ck or balls, Sorry ladies he has nothing to give/
I raise the roth to the atmosphere and bring it back to the surface/
CRV you the type to go to jail and drop the soap on purpose/
Your a little schizo with the pen man/
This guys taking up for michael cuz he use to take trips to neverland/
Its no wonder my flow is to massive/
Im just to much to touch im active your passive/
F*cking with me will leave you with a cracked dome/
Dont take your animosity out on me because your having problems at home/














your the dumass you dont know what quintessence mean. THat why im above your comprehension.

quintessence- the essence of something in its purest form

what i mean was i was have the gift and the curse
now go shoot yourself lol