4 poems, originally posted on my xanga. |
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 Mar 9 2005, 09:55 PM
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 dripping destruction  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929  |
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what fell off the ivory tower this wilted destroyed beautiful flower what do i hold in my hand which on this spot of earth did land a thing of beauty, fallen from grace now dreadful horrors it does face silence now- it does sleep for its former glory we do weep fallen ©2005 by me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Due Monday I've got a project due Monday, today is Sunday night there isn't much i can do now so please turn off the light sleep, sleep , sleep all night dream, dream, dream tonight leave this world behind for tommorrow you shall die. Due Monday ©2005 by me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Waves and Planes The waves crahsed upon the shor as out to sea I looked and what did i see but sea and a plane coming towards the shore I thought- that's strange where's the airport untill i saw the wing the wing on fire and then i knew it was headed towards this shore It crashed upon it so hard And i just sat amazed till tow men ran to it with remote control in hand to fix the plane and fly it again and the waves crashed upon the shore. Waves and Planes ©2005 by me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I feel the Ink I feel the Ink flowing from my pen, like the blood from a wound It carries with it my life- everything i think. it carries with it truth and lies It shows itself on paper as if it is my soul It is my Ink It flows from the pen like the tricle of ta stream thoughts and memories, flowing out yet it is but plain ink I curve it to my will make it my slave It is my Ink It is my Slave it is my Soul I feel the Ink ©2005 by me yes... randomish. |
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Mar 10 2005, 08:08 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
"I feel the Ink" <--That one was really good.
I liked them all, but "I feel the Ink" was my favorite. Nice job! |
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Mar 12 2005, 11:32 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 499 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 109,961 |
What do all these poems mean please someone explain?!?!...I juss write'em and they're easy to get I need to go deeper into thought!!!...
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Mar 13 2005, 01:17 AM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
I think they were pretty good, but I prefer more realistic poems. Like... ones that have to do with life and death; love and heartbreak, etc.... But, for what they are, they're pretty good.
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Mar 13 2005, 01:36 PM
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dripping destruction Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929 |
that's ironic... i usually do write realistic poems like that...
these are just some that i wrote because i thought i was being to gloomy. |
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