Untitled, help me think of a name =) |
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 Feb 24 2005, 03:36 PM
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 i've never wanted anything rationale.  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045  |
this is a poem that my friend Matt and I wrote back and forth last year =). it is kinda long.
We dream together And time stops For together we Are forever And our lips meet sure And together we hold Each other, Embrace each other As the night flies by. The night is true as we lay entwined All thoughts delayed. Just the two of us With nothing in the way. And our bodies connect Like a puzzle piece Perfect and immortal In every way. While our hands roam free Not caring where Whatever happens now Was destined to be I strike gold You strike high key And we sing together As if we were meant to be Opera pitch, Just the two of us Damn we're loud Hope the neighbors are up My hand slides up And caresses you so Tears begin to stream as our Love is spilled Tears of ecstasy Along with Screams of pleasure Fill the room We lay together Side by side Embracing each other Loving each other. |
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Feb 24 2005, 03:40 PM
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screams of ecstacy? O__O
oh wow lol i didnt know girls thought like that much hrm but.... i think its really good.... Relinquished Ecstacy? lol.... i dont know.... ill think of some more |
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Feb 24 2005, 03:42 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
how about just...'we'
its simple, and sums up two people together... eh is not great, but i'll give it some more thought i really like the poem tho |
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Feb 24 2005, 03:42 PM
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i've never wanted anything rationale. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 |
QUOTE(JlIaTMK @ Feb 24 2005, 1:40 PM) screams of ecstacy? O__O oh wow lol i didnt know girls thought like that much  haha, well remember 1/2 of the poem is written by my romance loving friend Matt. |
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Feb 24 2005, 03:47 PM
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lol :P its so sexual in that one line though lol... romance doesnt have to be sex LMAO :P
but i love it great job |
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Feb 24 2005, 03:48 PM
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i've never wanted anything rationale. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 |
lol thanks =)
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Feb 24 2005, 03:50 PM
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uh...hrmmm... "alone together"??? i dont know im no
good at naming. |
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Feb 24 2005, 03:55 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 7,048 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,696 |
How about
Lecherous |
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Feb 24 2005, 03:57 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
^^
thats too harsh, its a loving relationship, not just one person being lechy |
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Feb 24 2005, 04:05 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 7,048 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,696 |
O__O what do you mean? lol
are you thinking of lechy or leachy lol LMAO |
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