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KISS, just a poem suggestions
Dabme
post Jul 27 2005, 02:47 PM
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The first time I saw you smile
I knew Id never be the same
You made me feel worth while
And diminished the shame

I wanted you to be your best
Grasp your goals and achieve
Watch you at night when you rest
Be the one who made you believe

Even in my times of need
You'd always be there
All my problems would secede
Because I knew you'd care

Here I am standing here
At your door thinking of this
Life became clear
After our first kiss


I think its missing something right in the middle.
 

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guessewho   KISS   Jul 27 2005, 02:47 PM
Paradox of Life   I think it's fine where it is, but the focus o...   Jul 28 2005, 04:46 PM


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