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akjsd
post Jun 17 2005, 10:45 PM
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Sorry Daddy,
I don't call everyday .
It's just, everytime we talk, i have nothing to say .
I guess it's because, we've never been that close,
you've never been there for me when i needed you most .
I really do try to be a good daughter,
but it's hard to do so, when you're a bad father .

Sorry Mommy,
I'm not really the best,
been holding it in, but i gotta get this off my chest .
I'm tired of your scolding, all you do is yell, shout, and scream .
Now i'm tired of living my life through your dreams .
Stop thinking that everything i do is simply corrupt,
can't you accept the fact that i just want to grow up ?

Let me live my life, stop holding me down .
Stop looking at everything that i do with a frown .
I dont understand why you just can't leave me alone .
Please accept the fact that your little girl has grown .
If you're tying to change me, then you're out of luck,
because who cares what you want ? i don't give a f**k .
 

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