poem: Let it fall, tell me what you think |
poem: Let it fall, tell me what you think |
May 28 2005, 06:54 PM
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Let it Fall I cant stop thinking of When it rained that night I thought I knew the meaning of love And I believed I was right A voice whispered into my ear An crepted into my heart "Hold her tight,hold her near" Thats when it began to start I had this obsession inside of me And Lied to you straight to your face Didnt want you to see So our love began to erase I felt so empty deep down inside You were drifting away While I was trying to hide You didnt know what to say Talking didnt work I was confused in my mind Why does love hurt? This answer was hard to find I didnt know you any more Not as I use to I felt so unsure Didnt know what to do Just as rain is cold So was I I didntt want your hand to hold So I made you cry Now water falls down on me It makes me feel the pain But yet I finaly see I am the rain |
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guessewho poem: Let it fall May 28 2005, 06:54 PM
xKait13x Wow, that's really good... May 28 2005, 09:11 PM
yukichan wow thats good..kinda sad though.. good job! May 29 2005, 04:12 AM
xFaith wow thats beautiful :) May 29 2005, 05:11 AM
hollesther Wow,that was a really great poem May 30 2005, 10:14 PM
guessewho thx alot everyone May 31 2005, 01:47 PM
ItzOnlySydney great poem and i really felt this one =) Jun 4 2005, 02:15 AM![]() ![]() |