Trapped, Critique please! |
 Mar 5 2005, 10:18 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you!  Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674  |
I've been doing a lot of critique-ing myself (not neccessarily on createblog) and I think I deserve some brutal honesty. I wrote this poem a few days ago. A whirlpool of my darkness on paper.
Trapped Inescapable darkness, Repeated failures, Constant miseries, It's so dark. The world, Cast shadows, On me, I can't find the light. |
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Paradox of Life Trapped Mar 5 2005, 10:18 PM
stephinika simple, yet good. nice job. Mar 6 2005, 01:16 AM
--{Empty}-- Not bad at all, I personally found this piece a bi... Mar 6 2005, 04:44 AM  |
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