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You, a sweet/sad little poem
azn hunni xox
post Jan 9 2005, 05:04 PM
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You

When my world was charcoaled black,
You gave me inspiration to get on track,
The conforting words you talked me through,
I guess I believed that they were true,
The powers you have to make me smile,
But the happiness... it's been a while,
Looking at you, seeing your soft warm eyes,
How they've changed, now all I see are lies,
The ways you've hurt me, like you don't care,
The goodness I got out of you, the things I bear,
You don't know how much I've lost,
You said you'd do anything, no matter the cost,
But now I know, my life is so low,
I've tried to be strong, tried to free myself of woe,
But for some reason I can't,
I've forgotten your faithful chant,
It's so clear now, there's nothing I can do,
All I ever needed... was you.


Okay, so it's not great... but what do you expect from a 12 year old?
 

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azn hunni xox   You   Jan 9 2005, 05:04 PM
ryfitaDF   i like it. easy to relate to. keep up the good wor...   Jan 10 2005, 01:22 AM
MyVermilionPlague   Ooh. Pretty good! I like it. Nice job. [=   Jan 11 2005, 05:54 PM
angel-roh   wow your 12 years old...hehe nice for a 12 year ol...   Jan 11 2005, 06:56 PM
iiiiiiiYON   GOOD POTENTiAL HAWMiE   Jan 17 2005, 01:16 AM
xSWEETxCANDiix   That's so deep I love it   Jan 17 2005, 03:27 AM
xquizit_femme   nice :]   Jan 17 2005, 03:40 AM
xtransatlanticismx   hey! i'm twelve years old too! it...   Jan 18 2005, 04:19 PM
sheepy   wow you're 12? that's awesome girl. i love...   Feb 4 2005, 08:00 PM


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