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my love poem
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Sep 24 2004, 03:26 PM
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we both sit next to each other in the still of the night
saying these words everything will be alright
the moon shined down on us there was a sparkle in your eye
it was tears falling down your face you started to cry
i held u tight to be next to you
telling the whole world how much i love you
u smiled back at me with that look on ur face
i told u baybee no one can ever take yur place
its hard for me to explain cuz i love u so much
but its that kinda love no one can touch
i promise someday it will be me and you
till then im always loving you

i like writing but i dunno why i cant write an essay or get good grades in english geez lol
 

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dispn0ygonekrazy   my love poem   Sep 24 2004, 03:26 PM
MasteRxKiD   Ah, yet another love poem.... For one, Welcome to...   Sep 24 2004, 03:47 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   hehe thnx for advice man ima use it   Sep 24 2004, 03:54 PM
rainnydaiis   master is ruler of writing +P haha nice one loved...   Sep 24 2004, 03:57 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   thnx yeh he got a point i dont very much use the g...   Sep 24 2004, 04:07 PM
rainnydaiis   same i hate writing to a like guideline.. like 8 s...   Sep 24 2004, 04:09 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   lol yeah i agree with you on that i hate rules to ...   Sep 24 2004, 04:10 PM
rainnydaiis   omg thank god sometimes when we free write for poe...   Sep 24 2004, 04:11 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   LMAO yes well heres another poem hmm a poem out...   Sep 24 2004, 04:12 PM
rainnydaiis   oo was that a quickie?   Sep 24 2004, 04:13 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   yep a quickie   Sep 24 2004, 04:15 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   another poem enjoy why do i pretend its all okay ...   Sep 24 2004, 04:21 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   poem fantic srry i thought it was right to be wit...   Sep 24 2004, 04:23 PM
rainnydaiis   lolz nice poems but just make new topics for each...   Sep 24 2004, 04:24 PM
MasteRxKiD   Haha, Thanks for the comment about me being the ...   Sep 24 2004, 05:06 PM
wind&fire   "i told u baybee no one can ever take yur pla...   Sep 27 2004, 03:25 AM
pinksparkliefire   this is my love poem....... I think about your fa...   Sep 27 2004, 04:26 PM
pinksparkliefire   heres another one...... I asked him if he likes m...   Sep 27 2004, 04:30 PM
Heathasm   QUOTE(pinksparkliefire @ Sep 27 2004, 4:30 PM...   Sep 27 2004, 06:03 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   true i heard the same b4 too   Sep 27 2004, 06:18 PM
MasteRxKiD   Makes me question whether or not the first one you...   Sep 27 2004, 11:05 PM
j x tEARz   Nice poem~   Sep 30 2004, 02:19 PM


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