little poems.... |
 Jul 29 2004, 06:52 PM
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i made some little poems...give me some feedback, please?
"ALONE" The pain of an Unwanted Child Would make a list longer than a Mile. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "RUN" Abandoned by those by whom she loves, made her want to run To escape from the ache That slowly killed her Inside. |
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