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Love hurts
Devastation
post Jul 26 2004, 09:57 AM
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Everything crashing down, no wonder im in such pain.

my days are more lonely, i take that in vain.

I dont have the heart to go on anymore, my heart gave in.

it doesnt have enough power to go on, if it does its a sin.

Love crushed me once, should i love again?

Does it even matter? all of this depends.

I hope she likes me, we were meant to be.

but through her eyes, i dont think she see's.

I wish i can tell her, but im too shy.

everynight i look at the stars and wish, wishing she was my girl...i cry.

but i hope and pray, that one day she will see.

how me and her were forever ment to be.


heh, i have plenty more, give me some opinions ya guys. If the commentz are any good i'll post more. anyways hope ya enjoy biggrin.gif
 

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Devastation   Love hurts   Jul 26 2004, 09:57 AM
islandkiss   aww. that was nice.   Jul 26 2004, 10:25 AM
LiNHy POO   ooo i love it!!!! great with ryhmi...   Jul 26 2004, 02:07 PM
Caitlin   aww i love that <3 keep up the good work   Jul 26 2004, 03:42 PM
Fashionista225   I like the flow and the message itself. The rhymin...   Jul 26 2004, 03:48 PM
Foolish Heart   I love it!! write more!!   Jul 28 2004, 05:41 AM
NatiMarie   Andrew! You're so talented. =) Aww...this ...   Aug 8 2004, 11:07 PM
marfmallow   THAS SHOO CUTEEEE!!!!!!...   Aug 8 2004, 11:11 PM
F1R3B4T   great work wit the rhyming... i guess its one of t...   Aug 9 2004, 12:37 AM
strwbrrykiwi23   love the rhymes... i like it.   Aug 9 2004, 07:52 AM


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