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[xtremeliquid]

I posted this on my forum to see what people would say about it. I've decided to post it here also.

Thoughts
The deviant deceit of human emotions
Crumbles straight towards the ground unhinged
With a sense pertaining to the perception of the aesthetic soul
And towards to endless despair that seemed to evoke eccentric actions

To fathom from the perturbed mind and feelings
Into the intangible thoughts of regrets and melancholy
Experiencing lament on the first few days of eternity
And to have the tendency to hinder the morals of us all

As the door crashes shut with the inevitable gate closing
With the human body trying to desperately escape through the gasping breath of fire
To be able to leave with a sense of purity
And to be able to hinder the mind from dementedness.