my poetry, please rate it Options

[rOckThISshYt]

hey everyone. i really love to write poetry and i was wondering what you think. can you like rate it on a scale from one to ten please? here it is.......................

so simple

you say it's so simple
but i can't wear that dimple
that stays plastered on your face
but all i'm doing is running in place

you say that i'm all alone
but at least i'm not a clone
of all those people
and don't act like i have their seiple

you say that i'm immature
but that just proves it
i always knew that you were insecure
and now you have lost that old wit




like a shield

you wear that mask
like a shield
conseal your eyes
and always yeild
i sould warn you
life is slipping away
but you cannot see
what your life
was meant to be
you know i'll catch you
to break your fall
but i can't always be there
on your call





i have tons more that should be saved on my computer, but my computer is being evil. i'll add some other poetry some time soon!!