The First time, nice poem |
The First time, nice poem |
Nov 17 2006, 12:49 AM
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One teenager lost in love
That’s what I was Kissing was our hobby I loved him He liked me There was a party one day I walked upstairs Reminiscing the childhood days He followed me My body went shaky His body felt warm Showing each other some love I lost myself that day My integrity and pride For he dumped for the cheerleader The blonde girl with the long legs and rosy lips I lost myself to the guy of my dreams I should have waited for the day That I lost my most precious gift I should have lost it to the person I am with today |
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priyas The First time Nov 17 2006, 12:49 AM
yrrnotelekktric hm. i like it. Nov 20 2006, 03:18 PM
Gilbertay Very straight forward yet really good. Nov 23 2006, 10:08 PM
boo! grr... aww this is a really sweet poem. so tell me how do... Dec 4 2006, 03:21 AM![]() ![]() |