Momma used to tell me |
Momma used to tell me |
| *My Cinderella.* |
Mar 29 2006, 09:37 PM
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Momma used to tell me that love wasn't real
and that you couldn't always tell by the way that you feel Momma used to tell me that the tales were fake and in order to have a happy ending it was up to you to make Momma used to tell me that love was a dream and when you finally get a hold of it, it isn't what it seems As time slowly passed, my momma was right There was no prince charming, no love at first sight Momma used to sing about how her and dad used to be Used to be together, in love, even had a family But now all that love is gone, it can never come back cause I knew that it was over when daddy stood at the door with his sack There were tears in our eyes, and thats when I knew Momma was right when she said that it hurts to lose a boo. I never wanna feel the pain that I once felt. But still I long for that feeling, for that boy who would make my heart melt. But alas, momma is right and that's all I'll ever know why? because I never again want to see my daddy go. And the memory still replays in my mind every second, every minute, every single time... Basically, just need some C&C. Wrote this out of boredom. |
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My Cinderella. Momma used to tell me Mar 29 2006, 09:37 PM
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skp86 It sounds like a rap to me
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My Cinderella. ^ thank you so much Mar 31 2006, 11:30 AM
My Cinderella. ^ Thank you so much Yen. Apr 1 2006, 12:24 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK ^You're welcome. Apr 1 2006, 12:27 PM![]() ![]() |