QUICK!!!, I need to know what poem to say! |
 Mar 21 2006, 10:46 PM
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victim of myspace.com  Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435  |
Okay, so I wrote two poems, both the same thing but with different words, and I need help picking which one!! HELP!
Option One One window is all I need To look out at the world To see the road I have not yet taken. For my future experiences to be seen To reflect with the way I see myself, And forget what others think of me. Option Two One window is all I need To look out at the world To see the road I have not yet taken. One window is all I need To be the sun. Enlightening those to dark to see The exciting colors of life. ----- I think option 1 flows better, but I think the second stanza of the second option is a little better than the first overall poem. I DON'T KNOW HELP!!!!! |
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Ice Cream 4 U QUICK!!! Mar 21 2006, 10:46 PM
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