Her Stage Behind The Wall, Heh Options

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Had to write this for English class and I felt like sharing

He can’t see past the wall.
There is no around.
But over it he can hear
her silent screaming sound.

She sits lonely, She cries blindly
The only actions are her tears
falling slowly.
She stands the center of the stage
Lines imprinted upon past events cried
Acting screened by the red curtains.
He’s the only one moving it aside.

He’s the only who can think
Outside those petty explanations.
Only one brave enough to search
for her true hidden emotions.
At last scaling the wall high,
With one small window.
Real thoughts singing out
Someone’s finally going to find her sorrow.

As he climbs the unthinkable height
As he looks for an open way
As he ignores that empty space
inside him that always makes him stay.
The only treasure for him at the top
is the one and only, her play.
Her scripted lines of humor and laughs,
the faked jokes of everyday.

And then with those laughs
and memories worthwhile.
He’s the only one now who can save
the grief behind her b.r.o.k.e.n smile.

Criticism/Comments or anything would help