paternal love, english short story |
 Feb 9 2005, 09:49 PM
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yep in english class we have to write a short story. i know my idea, but i dont know how to develop it. here's the meat of it.
17 year old girl. her mom had her when she was 16. so her moms only 33. and her mom is dating a man who is 30. the man has the hots for the girl. i know it's a bit disturbing, but i want a twisted story. and then i dont know how to start a conflict here and start the relationship between the man and the girl. but in the end. the mom goes with the man and thinks her daughter is crazy so sends her to a doctor. and then the girl packs her things and just starts walking. so it's kinda indeterminate. i want the audience to think "is the girl crazy or was the man interested in her?" but i dont know what events to put in the middle. any help? |
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Feb 10 2005, 12:27 AM
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 Quand j'étais jeune... Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 6,826 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,272 |
You could have him approach her with sexual innuendos without having to go into detail about what he really means, and when the girl had enough and turns him down, he becomes abusive (so you don't have to write just about sexual encounters)? Then when she tries to tell her Mom, she gets sent to the doctor?
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teeners__15 paternal love Feb 9 2005, 09:49 PM
mysticalazxn relationship between the man and the girl:
1) said... Feb 9 2005, 10:38 PM teeners__15 uhh i think my teacher said keep pg 13. if not i w... Feb 9 2005, 10:49 PM sunissed14127 well maybe, to start the relationship with the gir... Feb 14 2005, 04:26 PM
smile4me lol. i saw a movie on lifetime that was just like ... Feb 15 2005, 01:01 AM |
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