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A poem
ichiban
post Apr 4 2004, 05:32 PM
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Yesterday my friend came over .. and we wrote a little love poem! lol we're amateurz, so it sounds sort of weird:

i didnt think i could love
anyone as much as i love you
for the sound of ur voice
makes all my dreamz come true


i need u to be there for me
constantly waiting and listenin to my pleas
i need u there to cheer me up
i need u there to wish me good luck

so ... waddaya think? lol
 
 
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LuShuZxLaNa
post Apr 9 2004, 02:17 PM
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QUOTE(LQ_Darksoul @ Apr 8 2004, 11:18 PM)
Well elongated tonge girl, I don't like long poems because my attention span is so low that mostly I get bored with something then just leave it alone.  It happens so freq  *walks away from the computer to chase a fly*

haha. anyways okay so.... its not a bad thing to have a elongated tongue. i enjoy it. A LOT.

anyways, so... have you ever liked any long poems at all? i mean what if the poems has lot of lines, but only contained like 3 or 4 words per line?
 

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