untitled, help? ^^ Options

[TreesTurnMeOn]

I dont have a title for this one, so yeah..if anyone has any ideas, id like to hear them. ^^

Save me now, hold your breath
The core in my shell is being sentenced to death
Unspeakable anger held inside
Bounties of my splender are old and dried
Beating intensely on four walls
Deep, dark, down I fall
Shadows passing;world fades away
Eyes will never see the light of day
Sharp whips beat slashes on my back
Blindness consumed in the already pitch black
Running in circles;no escape
Unbelievable terror;can't intake
Gasping for air;drowned from air
Excessive pain in this hell of a lair
Eyes slowly closing;lungs exhale
Won't ever live to tell the tale
Blood in veins slow their speed
Tragic death taking the lead
Heart beat stops;frigid cold
Story of my death has finally been told



Not one of my best

[*stephinika*]

not bad. i like it. i like the ending.