scared, just killing time |
 Jan 28 2005, 07:44 PM
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 i am a liar  Group: Member Posts: 69 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 77,216  |
scared
there is a scared little girl under there, under the makeup and the stiletto heels and the miniskirt swaying to the beat among a mass of bodies sweat and sex under that there is a girl scared to death of how long it will be until someone figures her out for that person she doesn't want to be. |
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Jan 30 2005, 08:59 PM
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 and they say imitation is flattering Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 |
that was pretty good. I don't really have any criticisms, but I thought that was a pretty good poem.
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xtransatlanticismx scared Jan 28 2005, 07:44 PM
Wishful_Dream all your poems are terrific. I love them. =) Jan 30 2005, 12:12 AM smthngcrprategrl34 props! Jan 30 2005, 12:57 PM stephinika very nice. i love the concept. Jan 30 2005, 08:16 PM helllla jankyyyy Very nice. Jan 30 2005, 08:34 PM helllla jankyyyy i really like it. Nice job Jan 30 2005, 08:34 PM
Sa-Chan It was really good. I wish it was longer so I coul... Jan 31 2005, 08:52 PM |
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