Repulsivly Idiotic |
 Jan 29 2005, 08:50 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time  Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705  |
It's an idiotic situation
And your an idiot on your own You won't listen to a word I say Rejected the facts I've shown And she isn't right for you Trust me, it is true I've told you many times before But all I want to see Is you being happy Even though you deserve much more It's a repulsive matter And she's repulsive all the time Not as innocent as she seems She is completely guilty of her crime And she isn't right for you Trust me, it is true I've told you many times before But all I want to see Is you being happy Even though you deserve much more Its an idiotic situation Impossible to make an implementation A completely repulsive matter Reality waiting for the disaster And she isn't right for you Trust me, it is true I've told you many times before But all I want to see Is you being happy Even though you deserve much more Comments and constructive criticism wanted and needed. ^^ |
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Jan 30 2005, 08:33 PM
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Aw. I really like it. Good job =]]
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TreesTurnMeOn Repulsivly Idiotic Jan 29 2005, 08:50 PM
Sa-Chan This is sweet. I really like it...It makes me sad,... Jan 29 2005, 10:34 PM xtransatlanticismx the rhyming is quite nice; it doesn't seem obv... Jan 30 2005, 12:35 AM
TreesTurnMeOn QUOTE(xtransatlanticismx @ Jan 30 2005, 12:35... Jan 30 2005, 09:32 AM sheepy aww its really good. i loved the whole thing :] Jan 30 2005, 12:08 PM TreesTurnMeOn QUOTE(sheepy @ Jan 30 2005, 12:08 PM)aww its ... Jan 30 2005, 01:29 PM stephinika very nicely written. i like it. keep up the good w... Jan 30 2005, 08:16 PM stephinika //edit// ahh double post...my bad. Jan 30 2005, 08:17 PM ryfitaDF i've lived through that many a times. i like i... Jan 31 2005, 03:53 PM |
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