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 Jan 24 2005, 08:33 PM
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 hannah the one and only~  Group: Member Posts: 175 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,080  |
i got this from a friend
i wrote this whole poem of things left unsaid... but then i earased the by accident... first i thought maybe it was sign... but i still have these feelings on my mind...maybe if i was brave we wouldnt be left in this perdicament.. i am weak on my own.. no...no i dont want to be alone.... |
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Jan 27 2005, 04:04 PM
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not bad. but i think it would be considered prose, not poetry
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hannah1019 unsaid Jan 24 2005, 08:33 PM
xGlovex very cool. sounds lonly..:( Jan 24 2005, 10:17 PM cewinee aw i wish i coulda read it =(
feel the same way Jan 26 2005, 03:04 PM
Azarel QUOTE(cewinee @ Jan 26 2005, 12:04 PM)aw i wi... Jan 26 2005, 03:06 PM aznxdreamer er...try putting it in poetry form? you know..one ... Jan 27 2005, 12:03 AM stephinika ^^
agreed.. Jan 27 2005, 12:55 AM hannah1019 first off i told my friend the constructive critiq... Jan 28 2005, 08:36 PM |
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