Califorina Rain |
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 Jan 26 2005, 03:47 AM
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I've lost myself in you.
Every word you say, make me more attached Only to be thrown away, just like trash. You told me that you loved me, Now you are leaving me for a sunset over an ocean. Why am I doing this? I will only start some commotion. I listen to the songs you sent me The ones that made me smile. Now as I listen to them I cry for the longest while. I think of things that you said would happen But now they are just a mere sentence. My heart braces to shatter, As only months, count down until you leave me for the sandy surf. But do my feelings really matter? I can't try and get you to stay The palm trees swaying in the breeze call your name While I watch, you walk away. I have to stay in my silence, for I know you would never listen and stay. I guess I just don't compare to that salty wave.  Havent posted in a while.
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Jan 27 2005, 02:51 AM
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 It's "Rock The CASBAH"! NOT CATWALK!  Group: Member Posts: 282 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,989 |
 That's sumthing I felt in the heart! R U a musician? If so...JIM MORRISON...WATCH OUT! (that's a BIG complement from me cuz usually people aren't good enuff 2 compare 2 Jim, who is THE GREATEST POET & SONGWRITTER 2 HAVE EVER LIVED!!!!). I luv it  ... I write songs/poems too! I'll post one up sumday!
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mSz_dOrk_anGeL Califorina Rain Jan 26 2005, 03:47 AM
stephinika well done. i like it...good imagery. Jan 27 2005, 02:08 AM mSz_dOrk_anGeL Thanks to both of you
I wrote it at 4:30 am whi... Jan 27 2005, 04:06 AM
Nicolatofu oo nice I like how you used california's lovel... Jan 27 2005, 08:07 AM |
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